need help wih a reay violent scene[dont read if you are under 18] (28)

1 Name: SeraEris : 2009-09-11 20:59 ID:8cWHYrni

ok do you remember the thread i made the other day about that scene i needed?

and it was lost with all the other stuff from the site :/

i remember all your ideas guys but i need your names to give you the proper references

so just write your name here so i can thank you ^_^

and the: [dont read if you are under 18]
on the titles is there only to be recognized by you my friends as the old thread ;)

2 Name: F2008&K18 : 2009-09-11 22:06 ID:+YMT3nWD

er...something about stabing him with a spoon, putting acide on sensitive areas, paper cutting him in very sensitive areas,raping him with a broken glass bottle then force him to eat and make him take laxitive, cut him with infected glass then add salt to all the wounds, follows by dumping salt water on him and carefully electrocute him to experience a shocking experience repeatedly, then cut him at all joints, letting them scab before forcing him to stretch and flex thus opening the wounds, then put salt back in the wounds.

oh, and something about breaking his appendages, but not enough for them to be amputated, just horribly crippled, then once healed breakem again. during the healing process peal back his fingernails, but let them heal and repeat. Oh! 'nother thought, have everyone threaten to kill him and make the pain worse for a week, then once he starts looking around for trouble for the next while he'll be extra paranoid and strung out, then once he relaxes the beginning that is.

Super glue his hands on a table or something and forcibly rip them off, someone suggested putting it in his eyes...shrug

others suggested something along the lines of fisting him, useing a huge dildo though how you find those in prison i'll never know. Sewing his skin then ripping it off and restarting.

if you plan on finishing him off, make him have to go to the lunch line, and have the cook or someone grab one of those baskets that are used to deepfry foods and dump it over the window thingofajig splashing it on him, insuring a slow and torturous death.

er............small blush kinda sadastic don't you think? K18

whatev, i kinda like the list, specially if the bloke deserves it though the laxitive part i would not like to see or hear, literally the screaming shits...pardon my language F2008

3 Name: SeraEris : 2009-09-11 23:42 ID:XNTzMk7o

lol thanx again for the ideas :D


4 Name: SeraEris : 2009-09-11 23:44 ID:XNTzMk7o

at the rape part and take laxitive next i thought for giving him an enema :D

5 Name: The one that will not be named : 2009-09-12 02:49 ID:NxFeXwg+

Lol, I don't remember exactly which ones I said before but here goes

  • the glove, vut around the wrist, cut upwards and then begin peeling of the skin of the hand till you get a 'glove'

-welder + skin = pain
-angelsmile, cut at the corners of the skin and punch in the stomach, through the scream of pain the cut spreads a la joker style
-superglue in their eyes, throat...
that's about it, can't remember the rest...

6 Name: SeraEris : 2009-09-12 03:07 ID:CutjhEnb


7 Name: Azmodai : 2009-09-12 09:09 ID:rePpbdC8

all the descriptions are great, but sometimes the best idea is to be vague, let people come up with their own ideas as to what happens, a well placed scene change can lead people to try and think and work out what happened to the person while going to a scene and describing the aftermath can also cause people to draw up images of dark and violent scenes.

8 Name: Sukari : 2009-09-12 15:37 ID:OUnW+X5m

I don't know what the hell any of you guys are talking about but I agree

9 Name: F2008&K18 : 2009-09-13 00:09 ID:AhIlNDcV

i think though..he's looking for a list of people who contributed to the ideas.......shrug F2008

K18 is missing at the momoment, something along the lines of i got work, see ya later.

10 Name: SeraEris : 2009-09-13 00:51 ID:FPJVBbT7

>>9 this is what exactly im looking for and...i m a ....she...:blush:

11 Name: F2008&K18 : 2009-09-15 13:54 ID:i6X9rnfo

sheepishly looks around, scratching back of head sorry bout that just forgot. you know, i think there is only like...5-7 guys here. when i replied i was on a cafine high and dead tired. F2008

(K18 is currently away, leaving the coffee pot for company, and it seems to be making good conversation at the moment*holds up cup of coffee*)

12 Name: SeraEris : 2009-09-15 14:53 ID:uV1EL+SI

its okay it happens to me all the time
some random old woman called me a man the other day

some 15 year old boys thought i was some gay man....

crosssdressing doesnt help the matter :s

13 Name: F2008&K18 : 2009-09-16 12:14 ID:NeH1gNOK

(f2008 is currently sleeping off caffine high, and is unable to reply)

tsks this is what happens when i leave the coffee with him, never did have a problem with the gender-confusion, but then again never did cross dress either. leave it to my dear brother here to forget ya being female, i swear i gotta remind him of practically everything since he goes from thing to thing, you know those people, do one thing, then do another, forgetting the last project.

14 Name: SeraEris : 2009-09-16 20:30 ID:yPyYLPA2

no gender confusion here
i just like to dress with man's clothes, skirts doesnt work for me :P

15 Name: Sukari : 2009-09-17 10:06 ID:FNIZikgT

I don't wear skirts either, I'm a jeans and t-shirt girl, but that doesn't make me gender-confused... does it :? ^^;

16 Name: SeraEris : 2009-09-17 10:12 ID:M6RxD8FT

lol nope
gender confused means to dont know if you like to be a man or a woman... i think

17 Name: Sukari : 2009-09-17 13:49 ID:FNIZikgT

Yeah I think that's right.

18 Name: F2008&K18 : 2009-09-17 16:42 ID:c1rCEQzB

wishes brother was here to give him a good slap on the head hey, in my defense i was half asleep. i think it's time i get him to have his own name instead of sharing this. though i think he may be genderconfused, he said he wanted to go as a cross dresser this halloween. F2008

19 Name: SeraEris : 2009-09-17 20:34 ID:cgkIhkXp


20 Name: bookmadabs : 2009-09-29 12:23 ID:NcAYDBLz

Wow, this threads really interesting, we've gone from horrible torture kinda things to what gender confusion is :P

On the torture idea...... well if you want ideas, powdering glass and then making someone inhale it, it'd cut their respiratory system.... or taking an eye out with a spork, that'd be painful.... that's all I've got at the moment sorry, if I come up with some other ideas, i'll let you know :P

Oh and I'm a chick and I'm totally into jeans and t- shirts..... haven't worn a dress or skirt in ages :P

21 Name: Sputnik : 2009-10-01 00:27 ID:1YT7Q/kK

make them watch twilight on an infinite loop

22 Name: SeraEris : 2009-10-01 08:26 ID:ARNvRo+5


back in topic

im thinking of give him the Chinese torture
the one with the guy tide up and water drops falling non stop like every few seconds on his forehead


23 Name: Tanuki-Gao : 2009-10-24 05:48 ID:OOxJaQPE

Torture, huh? scratches chin in deep thought
That's a pretty broad subject y'have set up...I mean, there is physcological torture and physical.. a mix of both is more interesting.
I wasnt apart of the old thread, so I don't know what is the character(s)/set up you've got going... But i think starvation is an interesting way of torture, and just to make things worse the only offered food could be that of a murdered comrade - a murdered comrade which they had to witness because they couldnt close their eyes because of the removal of eyelids!... Ahem, i best stop now...

I'm never of much use.. :]

24 Name: SeraEris : 2009-10-24 09:06 ID:XkzhnMC1


well the bastard im going to torture is an imprisoned rapist. my girl michiru managed to cut his ....ghmm... manhood when she saw him raping her girlfriend.

the man who will torture him is the father of the raped girl. he is a imprisoned [as well] assassin
i ll make the jails an old building to have a torture room or something

and the guys here gave me a lot of good ideas.

i need him also to die i bit fast
i mean torturing him all day and then let his die due to loss of blood or something.

thats all

25 Name: Sarkura : 2009-10-25 07:09 ID:+dDe8TGy

I have lots of ideas on this topic, but i'm not part of the old thread but i'll give you an idea anyway.
The rapist fights with the dad in the cell and the dad somehow grabs the rapist's hair and smashes his head into the old brick wall with a sharp, rusty, old nail, thus the rapist's head cracks and the brain liquid comes out. An instant kill... but it's not torture unless the rapist survives the blow and dies of blood loss. =3

26 Name: Sarkura : 2009-10-25 07:11 ID:+dDe8TGy

I have lots of ideas on this topic, but i'm not part of the old thread but i'll give you an idea anyway.
The rapist fights with the dad in the cell and the dad somehow grabs the rapist's hair and smashes his head into the old brick wall with a sharp, rusty, old nail, thus the rapist's head cracks and the brain liquid comes out. An instant kill... but it's not torture unless the rapist survives the blow and dies of blood loss. =3

27 Name: SeraEris : 2009-10-25 07:13 ID:Re1b+xpx

im really going to torture him
that idea with the broken bottle in his...ghmm...ass it would be really a pay back tactic.

the bastard raped my fav girl Haruka and she got pregnant and also got STDs i gave her a really hard time and pregnancy and the baby was premature and all.

28 Name: SPG inc. : 2009-10-27 02:11 ID:7Z/h+rKX

How about having a scene where the victim is blindfolded (and write from the victims POV) so neither the victim nor the reader knows what's coming until it actually happens.

Maybe he could leave the guy locked in a box/coffin/small cupboard when he goes for a break. If it's a very small container, just think of the muscle cramps it'd cause, not to mention the chance of having a panic attack. Increase the torment by wrapping his head in clingfilm and putting a tube up only one nostril for air. Think of his heart pounding and straining and his lungs burning and the crushing darkness, as well as the head overheating inside that clingfilm.

As for actual torture, have you used electricity? I once got a pretty high electric shock of a broken lamp. It makes your whole body shudder, causes arms and legs to sort of spasm slightly and leaves you shocked, confused, disorientated and in my case, pretty humiliated, and that was only a one second shock. A prolonged and high powered shock would be more painful and probably leave you with involentary twitches throughout the body.

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