Your First Fanfic (280)

1 Name: Crimson Cataclysm : 2009-09-10 18:29 ID:SSSO6lls

Same deal as it was the first time; what was your first fanfic about, and how has your writing changed since then?

Again, mine was an incredibly short, incredibly angsty, and incredibly mediore Halo fic about Linda. My writing has changed in that I don't like to write about angst anymore. :)

2 Name: Fuzzybuni : 2009-09-10 18:51 ID:6978FLOg

Oh God. My first fanfiction was a Zelda fanfiction called "Drowning In Pain" and I posted it on both dA and ff. D: When I look back, I'm very disappointed (well, not very, just a little) and it's full of lots of angst. You can smell the angst from a mile away, seriously.

I wrote it back in 2007, but my writing has improved a lot since then. I still write angst, but mostly romance, haha. (I'm a geek for the lovey-dovey romance stuff). But anyway, the fic has gotten me into writing more, getting into new fandoms and meeting new, amazing people (mostly from ff)!

3 Name: Pyro Raptor77 : 2009-09-10 20:10 ID:5VXzOigI

My first one that I posted was Attachment in Harvest Moon ff. I'm still pretty ok with it, because I only posted it about a year ago. Yeah, I'm still pretty new. :D

But the first one I ever wrote... that was for Starseige and it was a really, incredibly long time ago. I read it sometimes, and I'm thankful that I didn't know about fanfiction websites at the time.

4 Name: SeraEris : 2009-09-10 21:00 ID:dYBNfrY8

first fic ever
"Heaven's in Love"

it is up to 16000 words fic and it still is my best fic ever.

my writing style improved a lot since them but i have worked really hard for that fic so it is a really good one and written in decent english.

5 Name: Warper : 2009-09-10 21:59 ID:9v5vBpL7

Ah my first fanficiton was Naruto: Fox of Heaven and Hell.

An awesome fic with many crossovers and intricate side plots.

However the dialogue was cheesy and there were too many plot holes that were going to be explained later on that readers couldn't wait for so I now am in the process of rewriting it.

At first I was going to be nice to Sasuke, but this time I'll just make him the doomed evil destined to fail.

Sakura will get good treatment though.

6 Name: Sukari : 2009-09-11 01:11 ID:8p/UKXiO

Well I was reading fanfiction before I even knew what it was! I've been writing stories for as long as I remember, but my first real "fan" fiction was put up to ff.net in 2007... I think it was my random Friends/Tomb Raider crossover "The One With All The Tomb Raiders". I don't write for these genres any more, all I'm writing at the moment is Super Mario Brothers angst, which is purely disturbing if you don't understand me. And I think I've improved mostly with things like grammar.

7 Name: F2008&K18 : 2009-09-11 02:38 ID:uU6zMbII

first story huh...it would be a digimon fic, started it like..3 or so years ago, still working on it, along with 4 other fics...problem is, starting to lose interest in it.

at the moment i have 5 stories going with some singles.

8 Name: Chris000 : 2009-09-11 05:21 ID:gGgrXYeL

I first wrote fanfiction when I was in 7th grade. It was a 20 chapter fifty page story. It was my first Sonic/Halo official crossover too but I never fully explained plot details such as how they got there and all that. When I saw how well recieved it was, I started my fanfic boom that still continues to this day, making much more lore which eventually resulted in me writing a Bible so to speak that's a WIP on ff.net

9 Name: artemisdesari : 2009-09-11 05:44 ID:iSn8KZFo

I think my first fanfic was a Labyrinth one, rapidly followed by a Supernatural fic. I hate both of them now and keep meaning to go back and rework them, I just get distracted by other fics and work. Too much going on in my brain all at once!

10 Name: Bola : 2009-09-11 06:00 ID:HipZtko6

Ugh. My very first fanfiction published was POSITIVE, in the fandom of CSI:Miami. It counted about 2,370 words. It was a great piece of crap.

11 Name: Azmodai : 2009-09-11 08:08 ID:XWBiSAe9

my first fanfiction was a Warhammer Inquisitor story, about 7 pages long and resulted in the main character being killed and the redemption of a bad guy, i liked it when i first wrote it but now i look at it and just think "oh dear god what was i thinking."

12 Name: SlytherinPrincess : 2009-09-11 09:04 ID:4YFr1/Pd

my first fanfic was a torchwood story. It was loosly based on the doctor's daughter (Dr Who) and was fun to write at the time, as I was hooked on the Torchwood thing. Looking at it now, I just think, 'good idea then, not so good now'. It's called 'Knight in Shining Armour' and I haven't taken it down, it's a memory I like to think I can improve on.

My writing style has changed so much, and I'm glad it has.

13 Name: Eszie : 2009-09-11 09:54 ID:oZPI8qao

My first fanfic was a disaster! I wrote a fanfic about Fairly Odd Parents and it was called 'Troubles in the past'. My English grammar and spelling wasn't so good back then, so that was a disaster, but the rest of the whole story was a disaster too.
I'm really glad that I learned how I needed to write proper English and that I really made some progress the last 2-3 years.

14 Name: Judaphine : 2009-09-11 13:30 ID:YYSIMVCY

my first fanfic was god-awful, in my opinion. i couldn't stick to the plot worth a damn and finished it with a summary chapter just to kill it. i couldn't take it anymore. surprisingly, people liked it.

15 Name: LadyNightlord : 2009-09-11 14:33 ID:irvi0sFi

First fanfic......I don't even want to think about it! Absolutely awful piece of writing for a Naruto story staring Kakashi/OC pairing.

However the first fanfic I wrote and uploaded had to be Hellsing; "Sympthony of the Night" which actually went well but now I look over it I know I could have done better.

16 Name: Mikel Midnight : 2009-09-11 14:40 ID:lu6bdl/V

Amalgam Comics, finishing a story set in the 1940's which another writer started and never finished. Not my best work, but I don't think my style has changed all that much.

17 Name: TheNightShadow4 : 2009-09-11 15:07 ID:av7KQe60

I lost my frist fanfiction, but I think it was a Naruto songfic.

18 Name: Jackidy : 2009-09-13 03:57 ID:uXc3gSh+

My first one was....I honestly can't remember but after i deleted my old fics it was a Zemyx Kingdom Hearts one that was incredibly shot. Called Attack of the Demyx I think, well it was that or a Naruto one :S

19 Name: moose-girl6 : 2009-09-13 04:00 ID:hqlcuuY/

My first fanfic was a Twilight one which I'm still working on and will eventually re-do once I've figured out the entire plot and how things will work.

20 Name: sailorjupiterox : 2009-09-13 08:54 ID:7u9KB+J4

My first fanfic ... I don't even like to think of it! It was a story about Serena and Darien in Sailor Moon and how they were coping with being King and Queen of the World. My grammar, punctuation, and spelling was horrific.

I'm ashamed to say that I still love the story though :)

21 Name: horned reaper 266 : 2009-09-13 10:31 ID://YGh1KH

oh god mine was hideous it was a crossover fic between starwars and alien vs predator everything was bad in it spelling, grammar everthing

22 Name: lai jun chen : 2009-09-14 04:39 ID:7YdyKISM

i don't remember which fanfic exactly, was my first (i posted three the same day) but even after perhaps a year since i posted them i still get coments or 'fanfic favorites' for one or more of those three stories. so my forst fics couldn't have been that bad. (first fics were for Inuyasha. recent fics for D.gray-man).

23 Name: ZodiacRain : 2009-09-14 16:56 ID:UoyH+U3L

Actually... My first fanfic is so old that I don't remember it at all. I do remember, however, MSTing an older fanfic of mine. And I remember, far later on, reading that MST and thinking... "This MST is pretty bad. Not as bad as the fanfic, but..." So my first fanfic is so old that my self-MSTs are ancient.

I do remember one of my older Sailor Moon fanfics though. The main character was, essentially, me... if I could run around the forest without shoes on. The rest of the cast were rip-offs of Otaku Senshi I found online. The plotline was goofy, from what I remember: all the characters were siblings of the canon Senshi during the Silver Millennium cringe and now there was a war between the older sibligns and their sisters. Actually, that was the plan, but when I started writing it, I ended up with non-canon villains.

I lost all my original fanfics. I really want them back, even though they're probably not the best...

24 Name: elecktrum : 2009-09-19 14:16 ID:S+cEXv8Q

My first ever fanfic was written for 'Battle of the Planets,' an Americanized adaptation of the anime 'Gatchaman.' I think I was in 7th grade when I wrote it and it was light years beyond bad. I am so grateful that it's been consumed by some landfill in New Jersy. Mercifully, no one but me ever read it.

25 Name: TheDoubleMintTwins11 : 2009-09-20 14:26 ID:22fwDQLS

My first was One Piece: a Humorous Revenge. I barely remember what it was about, though I think it had something to do with the Strawhat crew(up to Robin) being captured by marines...anyway, somewhere along the way I lost it. It was written awfuly, and was really short (not to mention the fact that it was incomplete) but I really wish I still had that story to refer back to.

I believe I posted it on FFnet, and if i'm not mistaken, it was based on a filler from the anime, because I didn't even know there was such thing as manga at the time XD

Ah, looking back on it now, it just makes me laugh (and by "it" I, of course, mean my stupidity :P)

26 Name: Ginger Freak : 2009-09-22 09:48 ID:c+6xDEWh

My first fanfic is still on going :3 it's a DNAngel, Maximum Ride crossover. Since then I've started 3 more stories, one which I haven't published yet cuz two ongoing ones are crazy enough. lol

Since I've began writing my grammer is constantly criticised which has helped me improve a lot on my later chapters and since I just want to get the whole story writen down, corrections can wait until I've finished it...and probably a bit of re-writing as well.

27 Name: LeahRosex : 2009-09-23 12:32 ID:jHGDFfJX

My first fanfic was the Covenant: Damnation which is a fanfic I based around the covenant.

So far it is incomplete as I have lots more chapters coming up but if you want to check it out then go ahead, :D I am pretty new to fanfiction.net but I have already developed a passion for it :D

28 Name: Ashers : 2009-09-23 13:59 ID:zBcbPW1M

Mine was a Twilight one where I just leapt into and had in the end Bella getting hit by a bus...

I still haven't learned and I still leap into plots that haven't been planned out and I still have a lot of car accidents and really badly abuse my characters...

29 Name: SpikeyGirl : 2009-09-25 12:54 ID:xAx/HAgV

My first Fanfiction is still in progress but on the third 'part' which is almost done. It's ultimately based around Naruto but I've crossed over with many things during the story.

Through the portal:
Oh great, I'm 3 again
Do I have to grow up?
Flying solo, but am I flying free?

It's been almost two years and I remember exactly when I started it. Well the lesson I was sat in, bored out of my mind.

30 Name: Adelaide : 2009-09-25 14:11 ID:shZT4qWu

My first fanfic was a Digimon one - about eight years ago when I was fifteen. I already had a decent grasp on story writing because I was an avid reader and was read to a ridiculous amount as a kid (linked to eventual strong writing skills), and I had already been writing consistently the last couple of years. My spelling was excellent and the story format was fine, although my grammar needed a little work - especially in the realm of commas. I also didn't understand semi-colons then and thus decided never to use them.

Beyond that, however, it was when I learned that Mary Sue characters weren't worth even conceiving, let alone putting to paper. I knew people didn't like characters that were so liked and attractive and talented, and I was so worried about what people would think because I was going to post it online, so I attempted to cover it up best I could in my story. I was going to introduce a new character with the subconscious intent of creating a mix of who I was and who I wanted to be, but I ended up covering up the Mary Sue traits so well that the character wasn't all that Mary Sue and I realised how much better she was for it.

From then on, I focussed intently on all my characters. I now get a feel for who they are, instead of trying to make me fit into the plot.

31 Name: Ren'aiXhakumei : 2009-09-26 02:16 ID:rWUMFXKu

Mine was about...4 months ago. It seems like longer really ^^ I'm still new to it, but I feel like an expert in some light. I've got a few oneshots and 3 continuous stories. I think I have improved since I started...4 months ago, lol. I never used to capitalize the I's in 'I'm' or 'I'd'. I always used to have it like ''i'm so sad.'' or something like that. I think that I could have a better grasp on romance, considering that I've got no experiance in that field. I'm still waiting for that perfect someone, and when I do, it will really help my romance writing.

32 Name: Fee : 2009-09-26 09:43 ID:/f5/qXu6

My first story was Michael's Return, it was a Princess Diaries and it was shocking. Strangely, it's my second most popular story (?). My spelling was good, my grammar mostly fine...it was just the plotline that was the issue. The first chapter was 150 words, if that. You can watch the progression through the story. It's very rushed and...generally icky. I'm leaving it there as a reminder to myself of how not to write.

33 Name: Doomflower : 2009-09-28 09:08 ID:GC/1mtPR

The first fanfic I ever wrote was quite a twisted multi-chapter yaoi involving Reno from FFVII...I have never posted it anywhere, partly because I didn't want to upset anyone and partly because it's unfinished and probably always will be. I wrote it when I was 15.

The first fanfic I ever actually posted was called 'A Strange and Furious Pair' and I only posted that a few months ago (I'm now 25). It's for Arc: Twilight of the Spirits and yes it's also yaoi. I still like it, though it's not as good as most of the others (if you decide to check it out by clicking on my name, scroll down to the bottom, the fics at the top are random humorous non-yaoi ones written on request). I was still feeling a bit nervous about sharing, so I toned it down wuite a lot o_O

34 Name: michaela x : 2009-09-28 11:30 ID:6rxyD0sN

i'm still on my first fanfic lmao...back when i was obsessed with twilight....ah jasper♥

35 Name: Princess Tiger : 2009-09-28 12:37 ID:YVboS4gP

First fanfic is a Pokémon one entitled 'Friendship, Love and Rivalry' but it's still in progress. It's nowhere near finished, but I like to think my writing is far more interesting and discriptive than it was when I began. Fortunately, I have the rest of the story planned out...

36 Name: Maxximumride666 : 2009-10-03 10:08 ID:mFicUSrw

Umm my first fanfic was a Camp Rock one. It was a Tess/Caitlyn pairing and only about 500 hundred words. I'd watched Camp Rock finally and fell in love with the Tess/Mitchie, Tess/Caitlyn and Mitchie/Caitlyn pairings and i'd read every possible story on FanFiction.net with those pairings in and i decided it was time to write my own so i wrote 3 oneshots and started one longer story in quick succession in that day, all with one or more of the above pairings.
I'm still very much in love with those 3 pairs, and i've written more stories about them and my style has changed a heck of a lot but i still love looking back at my first 4 stories because they were pure and simple and i'm pretty damn proud of 'em XD

37 Name: CrAzYwRiTeRgUrL : 2009-10-05 11:18 ID:SHzbCpFj

Aww I still remember mine! It was called 'Why Does He Have TO Be So Good At Tranfiguration?!' It was a Lily/james sweet fluffy one shot!

38 Name: MissMarauders : 2009-10-05 11:53 ID:aqdPJffv

My first completed one was Lizzie McGuire. cries
I had one before that which was never completed, which was for LJ Smith's Daughters of Darkness.

39 Name: XxXSheIsTroubleXxX : 2009-10-05 15:15 ID:UXdEYCVL

first fanfic was a Digimon i never put it up, it was terrible. the first i actually put up was a Nightmare before christmas one on fanfiction.net i took it down after three chapters though.

40 Name: ShatteredGlass : 2009-10-06 09:15 ID:iXvpVv0/

Mine was a Doctor Who/Twilight crossover. Straight in at the deep end as they say.
It wasn'lt bad- until it got deleted. Now I'm going to re-edit it before I post it again- but it sholuld be essentially the same- it was good.

41 Name: ComaWhite.X : 2009-10-06 11:46 ID:2N+xoBJk

Lord, mine was written when I was 11 going on 12 about...oh, 3-4 years ago? I was a proper emo kid back then, though I would never have admitted it if you asked me, and, true to the stereotype, it was an OC and Gerard Way from My Chemical Romance love story. I hated it as soon as I started writing other fanfiction. I've always read, but fanfiction was new and exciting. When I came to I managed to begin character development with better plots and...better everything xD
My first fan-fic written about a fictional character or two was yaoi, like Doomflower's, but about my OTP Naruto and Sasuke from Naruto. That never got published and I'm so glad. My first published fan-fic on fictional characters was once again a Naruto fic but a humour story written for April Fools day on Kiba. That one I'm not too keen on but hey, we are our own worst critics :)

42 Name: ScourgeOfTheGalaxy : 2009-10-06 12:57 ID:l/NdZdI8

My first PUBLISHED fic was A Chance At A Cure. You can find it on my FF page (link above) as well as an updated version that I wrote half a year later implementing advice. My first fanfiction was a draft that was very badly written and is now lost irretreivebly (sp) on a hard disk in my room. That wiped itself FOR NO APPARENT REASON!!!

I think it was called Grace Of The Soaring Eagle. I might rewrite it...

43 Name: s i l v e r a u r o r a : 2009-10-07 11:08 ID:y0Ew+Qxg

God, my first fanfic was an embarrassment. It was too short, trying way to hard to be funny and so cheesy it's not true. Plus full of typos.

But, I was only 13, and I've left it up on my page so I can remind myself that I HAVE improved as a writer ;)

xxx

44 Name: Little Wildthing : 2009-10-08 09:13 ID:js67E5Pr

Lols still writting my first fanfiction from at least 6 months ago Title was "Demons Inside Me" -link above - based on Kakashi from Naruto and yeah.... its annoying how I have a break from it suddenly and I go back over my notes like 2 weeks later and cant remeber a single thing thats happened lols, each chapter kept getting longer and longer =3
LW
xxx

45 Name: Felix : 2009-10-08 10:39 ID:oTSAwBBD

Mine was a Warhammer Fantasy one about a sword possessed by a young girl. My second was a Pokemon called Capture involving people being changed into pokemon-and those are two of my best to this day.

Ohno wait, my FIRST was a Redwall that i started one summer when i was seven and never got back to. XD

46 Name: CSIvegasgirl : 2009-10-08 13:11 ID:wfLhGkLN

My first fic was a 'The Bill' one, called Lovers, Friends and Enemies. It's on my ff.net page (link above) It'll probably never be completed but I keep it there to chart my progress, and so I can see now what is wrong with it and maybe one day change it.

47 Name: stacie23103 : 2009-10-10 08:01 ID:LjpxuxoF

My first fanfic was a Twilight one called 'Meeting By Chance' and is still going on because i only started it about 4 months ago, although I think I have improved a bit since then.
I get lazy typing because I use microsoft word which has automatic spell checker for things like 'i' :P my first few chapters are terrible, but I can't think of any ways to improve them at the moment. I Don't think the story is great anyway, but I want to finish it then start one of many ideas I have floating around in my head.

48 Name: the Snail : 2009-10-10 12:18 ID:K2ihNbju

Oh holy hell. My first fan-fiction was... I can't actually remember ._.
It was probably posted on my first ever Quzilla account (now deleted xD), and it was most likely based on Naruto's Sasuke, written when I was about 10.
4, nearly 5, years on and I'm proud to say my writing's improved (for starters, no more Mary-Sues XD) and I've gone off of Sasuke. ;D

49 Name: LadyFervour : 2009-10-11 11:26 ID:iE86VLK1

My first fanfic was written on ff.net and is still up there :). I'm new to this whole thing really so think its one of the Star Ocean 4 things linked to my profile. I'm ok with all of them but they probably need proof reading.

I'm happy enough with them but my writing style's changed a lot in 6 months's I'm told

50 Name: katy1986 : 2009-10-19 08:20 ID:6L+DtDA/

My first fanfic was well i started 2 on top of each other a power ranger fic and a startgate fic. i was uploading a chapter of each story everytine i uploaded that was 3-4 years ago and didnt complete them, but now i have revamped them and i am carrying on with them.

51 Name: WillowTree91 : 2009-10-25 11:26 ID:hLHtXTu7

My first Fanfic was a terrible terrible LOTR one which I deludedly put under the humour section, the second one was the same. I'm sorry to say they are still up there on FFnet and I can't remove them because I have no idea what my old account details are, so I still have to suffer the shame of people actually seeing them, thankfully though there's only one person who can attribute them to me, and she co-wrote them so she'd never say anything. In our defence we were thirteen and bored.

52 Name: Anonymous : 2009-10-25 11:34 ID:qVOdv+33

>>51
I think that it is all the better for you to keep your bad fanfiction - that way, you can compare what you are doing now to what you were doing before.

53 Name: Nissyy : 2009-10-25 12:28 ID:gphiCCtj

Hmm well, my first fanfiction was around... 2/3 years ago, and it was based on the Night World series, starring the soulmate couple Ash&Mary-Lynnette Carter... I even went onto write a sequel!!

Anywayys. My first fanfic was the best ever, apprently, fresh and innocent, I was only around 12 years old then... many spelling and grammatarical mistakes, and too less of a plot etc, but, in the end, it is one of my bst pieces yet!!
[Which I know as the majority of my reviewers told me so xD]

My writing style has greatly improved, barely any spelling mistakes and also has become more sophistacted, more character depth and plots etc... though I am alwayys continually aiming to improve to please my readers!!

xxx

54 Name: Rockhardfairies : 2009-10-25 12:30 ID:mHdkGLiG

My first fanfiction was actually about Vanessa hudgens and Zac Efron! the first chapter was so short but i did progress since then and peoples reviews always help! after doing that story i got a beta reader and its the best thing i ever did-she helps me so much!!

55 Name: xx-AliceCullenForever-xx : 2009-10-26 10:33 ID:dTvE00MT

My first Fanfiction was Called spider pig about Emmett (Twilgiht) when i read through it the other day it was rteally embarassing

56 Name: Jay5merlin : 2009-10-26 11:02 ID:CF7Mf+zn

The first Fan-fic I ever wrote was the kind were you write before you realise how to write. It was a hopelessly OOC Class of the Titans plot, not intrinsically bad, but has nothing to recommend it either. I still got a couple of good reviews however, and amazingly at least two alerts! I haven't re-read it for months though, I ought to really and guffaw and my childish 13-year-old idiocy, although I am only 14 now.

57 Name: Dana-Lith : 2009-10-27 11:09 ID:jtCSzJkv

First fanfiction? Oh god...I shudder to think of it...It was a terrible LOTR AU oneshot - deleted now but I still have it saved to my computer so if i ever get delusions of skill i can read it and cringe at the terribleness...I sure hope I've improved! I can't stand that thing...

58 Name: mabel_marsters : 2009-10-27 13:22 ID:c+6xDEWh

I write in the BtVS fandom. My first fic was Fall of the Night a post series finale fic that plot-wise I'm proud of but grammar-wise not so much! LOL

I first posted on ff.net in Aug 07 and have just seen that I have over half a million words on there now! I know prefer using livejournal and the various communties on there but will always post on ff.net as that's where it all began :D

59 Name: hsmfan1351 : 2009-10-27 14:13 ID:SXyrffGY

>>54 I got a beta reader too! I do high school musical fanfics and I'm actually still in the middle of my first one. I have done one-shots and I actually want to re-write mine. My first fic is about Troy and Gabriella and Troy gets her pregnant at 14 and they both run away, I look at my latest chapter, chapter 28, and compare it to chapter 1, just looking back i sit and think wow! It took me ages to write 1,000 words and now I'm writing 3-4,000 words and still have more ideas.

I'm seriously considering re-writing mine, the first chapter is aweful!

60 Name: FemaleSpock : 2009-10-28 06:56 ID:HQolTI+Q

My first fanfiction was a fluffy Spock/Kirk fanfiction. It wasn't great at all; there was very little plot at all to it.
Thankfully I think I've improved (at least a bit) and I no longer write fluff.

61 Name: Moonstarer : 2009-10-28 07:18 ID:WHFy6SFO

First (and last) fan art was for a hard copy crossover zine involving Blake's 7 and BtVS.

Many years later my first fan fic was CSI: Vegas, an angst piece with Grissom as the vic because I was fed up of it always being Sara who got hurt.

Most of my work is still hurt Grissom stuff although I occasionaly challenge myself with a humorous shorter piece.

I have always tried to balance out the angst with some kind of case file.

Thankfully more people have joined me in hurting Grissom these days. :D

62 Name: Amaranth : 2009-10-28 17:02 ID:e9zBj3mQ

I believe my first fan fiction was written when I was 13 and was most likely a Draco Malfoy one... I did the most annoying thing any Draco fanfic writer can do and turned him into this disgustingly loving adorable thing who was only an arsehole because his daddy abused him and all he wanted was to be loved... it was written in script format too from a 2nd person point of view, using text language, of course.

Now I tend to stick with the characters' assigned personalities, I write in 1st or 3rd person and in prose opposed to script. I also have become a grammar snob and write for fanfiction.net rather than quizilla XD

My early writing days do make me chuckle though, it must be said.

63 Name: shadow243 : 2009-10-28 19:36 ID:UxSia+3S

My first was a Veronica Mars fic...I cannot believe how crap my writing was back then. I mean I'm not saying I've suddenly become good but it's much better than what it was back then. I made it end so sickenly sweet that the thought that I actually wrote that makes me cringe, but I was obssessed with that show at the time...lol.

64 Name: TearThePetals : 2009-10-28 19:47 ID:K6ddQIG0

I was about eleven years old and I wrote a very bad Buffy/Spike fic. I think I was basically taking libes I liked from other people's (good) fanfics and changing them to suit their siuation. This isn't counting the wonderful fanfic- quizzes (HP and LOTR) I wrote on Quizilla in which the reader was the main character. I like to think that I have evolved slightly seven years on.

65 Name: BadWerewolf : 2009-10-29 07:13 ID:hBcldX/6

Ugh, my first fanfiction was a character-piece on Voldemort, written before OotP was published, and it was utterly dreadful. I didn't know the meaning of a spellchecker then, it was totally OOC, and my ideas for backstory were... well, sad.

66 Name: TitanParadise : 2009-10-29 18:35 ID:m04SDQrC

God, my first fanfic, at least that I thought at the time was good enough to publish, was a Lord of the Rings OC. OMG, it was bad! My spelling and grammar was horrible, one of my chapters was six lines long - seriously! - and I ended up rewriting it not even a year later. The rewrite wasn't much better, lol.

67 Name: Frenetic-Kinetic : 2009-10-30 05:03 ID:0XabRdnj

Mine was incredibly short and terrible. It was a girl named after me who came across a Transformer in human form. It made no sense, and was barely four pages long.

68 Name: Toffy : 2009-10-31 14:12 ID:ljUGfqnQ

Mine was a digimon one that's still on my profile and is totally pants in comparison to some of my other stuff XD I've considered re-writing it actually as it's never been completed, but the roleplay it was based on has been closed for years and I've lost a thread on what happened now :(

69 Name: Lotus_Fly : 2009-10-31 15:15 ID:cxYaMyJa

My first fanfic was actually an analysation of the Mary Shelly's Frankenstein film, it was a bit weird :)

70 Name: Pondweed : 2009-10-31 17:05 ID:G5N1l8n4

My first fanfic (A Yassen-centric Alex Rider one) was written during my ICT lessons in year ten! it was fairly awful - i didn't know what grammar was and dialogue was just kind of accidental! i know how to do that now, though! :D

71 Name: RoseMMBlack : 2009-11-01 11:46 ID:YbPoR+cY

He heheheheh
Mine was a Harry potter one. I was twelven when I wrote it and it sucked! The plot was good and I'm going to go back and re-write it some day, but the gramma and words suck...I sooo much better now. It was over 15,000 words.

72 Name: Jaydie : 2009-11-01 12:39 ID:upTdjyLb

My first fanfic was a Doctor Who one, and written when I was about twelve or thirteen. It was about a Welsh vampire called Bronwyn who had an angsty past and was basically a huge brat. I found it a few months ago, and it mortified me so much that I deleted it clean off the website.

73 Name: bioldrawings : 2009-11-03 14:35 ID:0aJV0d+b

My first published fanfic is (I think) my best work yet, but my first ever is a Lion King scribble from when I was about four. I just re-discovered it and I'm half thinking of publishing (non-spelling and all) just because it makes me laugh.

74 Name: dance with the devil : 2009-11-03 14:46 ID:3hEjv8YV

my first fan-fiction was a Storm Hawks one, which wasn't very long ago that i started and i'm still working on it, but my best one is my Doctor who fic

75 Name: Stardust Master : 2009-11-05 09:26 ID:FRsICBfJ

Mine was called Love of a Magician Girl. A small oneshot based on the Yu-Gi-Oh series. I was much more o

76 Name: The Real Shana Cullen : 2009-11-05 09:59 ID:kYRQL1i3

Mine was a twilight, and Im still writing it. Its not so bad, but my favourite fan-fic would be the second one I wrote. My second fanfic was called: All I ever lived for.

77 Name: Maeniel Celeres : 2009-11-06 07:27 ID:b0gLwx6G

My first Fanfiction was a Naruto one called "The Wielder and the Container", which is a small crossover with Neverwinter Nights 2. Unfortunately, it's been on a long Hiatus, nearly two years in fact, though I did enjoy writing it. However I have been getting urges to start working on it again, though I'll definately need to take the direction the Mangas gone into account.

78 Name: Yellow 14 : 2009-11-06 07:34 ID:7CHkwyYN

My first fanfic? An Ace combat story that doesn't really go anywhere and still has absolutely no reviews. I leave it on the site because it's a record of my development as a writer. And it's not my worse fic, but I like to think I've improved

79 Name: Quarry : 2009-11-06 13:26 ID:0KMLfgj3

I was thirteen, it was beyblade, the yaoi was in full force. It was your run of the mill first person romcom and i'm acutally scarily proud of it. i cringe when looking at my grammer and the really badly formed ideas but at the same time i think that it could have gone a hell of a lot worse.

80 Name: Cutie100 : 2009-11-07 06:46 ID:Eq5BDvbw

I'm still sort of new to writing Fanfics but my first one was an ICarly fic called IAmFamous.

81 Name: sheechiibii : 2009-11-10 06:33 ID:UfCkmnrX

My first story was a Naruto fanfic, a romance with Naruto and Hinata. I never finished it...
That was about...two years ago? Maybe.

I don't even like that pairing any more for a start. It had so many cliché’s, sex in, like, the third chapter. Guns...yes, guns in the Naruto world - I don't know what I was thinking. It was bad - very bad.

But I've improved.
Definitely.
Maybe.
Hopefully...?

Xx..xX

82 Name: KAMENRIDER21 : 2009-11-10 07:40 ID:WMUk6dJp

For me was Kamen Rider Divide, it was my own story based on the Kamen Rider Series in Japan, I think i did quite bad for this, but i am still trying to improve on it.

83 Name: LoLo : 2009-11-16 08:50 ID:nTd2B30Y

My first fanfiction was a final fantasty VII one.

Looking back on it now and noting how much my writing style has changed from then I'm almost ashamed to have written it lol

84 Name: SOTS : 2009-11-16 11:37 ID:rVn9zHr/

Mine was based on a space sim, X2: The Threat. I started maybe three and a half years ago, now, without the forethought of planning beyond the next chapter, and even then, only in my head. It's still going on, though it's nearing completion. One good thing about it having taken so long is that I can see how my writing style has changed even over the course of that one story. (My FF name is the same as my posting name, if you're interested. The story is called 'Siege.' A better and more-complete version can be found on another forum, which I will link you to if you PM my FF account :) )

Since then, I've written a fair few other stories, almost all of them one-shot shorts, some fanfic, some otherwise. I got the bug, you could say ;)

85 Name: Iaculus : 2009-11-16 13:20 ID:26BxqXr6

My first solo fic? Still writing it. In fact, it's two-thirds of the way through, and already well past the length of Ender's Game.

I mean, good grief, that was a terrifying realisation.

86 Name: Daniel : 2009-11-16 16:43 ID:o1fY9oDi

eek i can't remember my very first fanfic. I wrote it about 3 or 4 years ago. And ive taken many of my first ones down since then. I do know that my writing has improved since then, as my stories have improved using better grammar skills, describing things better. My best story so far is A turn of the best, a star wars fan fic that im currently working on.

87 Name: NopeJustMe : 2009-11-16 17:44 ID:y9VfFZvf

Oh God, my first one was One Piece and written on a dare.
The dare? 'See how many people you can kill off' Yeah, you can imagine how that went. It was better than anything else I'd written, but I still cringe at it now

88 Name: PhoenixLumen : 2009-11-17 08:31 ID:MTem0qzS

My first fanfic was.....let me think.....(searches ff.net for publishing dates).....actually it turns out it's the story I'm floundering on right now. It's called Second Time Around, and it's a Stargate Atlantis time-travel fic I've had to put on hiatus since I've kinda lost the plot (so to speak), even though it's the longest story I've published so far.

89 Name: Lyokonian : 2009-11-17 09:14 ID:cTBB7xte

My first fanfic? Erm, still doing that one (writers block).
I have written other stories involving characters from Digimon but had nothing to do with the series at all (I just used the names).

Comparing my first story which was done when I was 13 to my latest story (I'm 21 now) there is a huge difference between my styles.
The fan-fic I am doing now is on Code:Lyoko (don't worry if you haven't heard of it, I'm used to it by now) and I'm still working on chapter 20 (been on hiatus for nearly 5 months now) . I have had other ideas for fanfics, I just don't have the time to write anything at the moment.

90 Name: AnimeCrystalPearl : 2009-11-17 09:27 ID:qDpYoDYS

My first fanfic was a Love Hina fanfic, Love Hina One More Time, and I used OCCs which I think is harder to do really.
It definately wasn't my best fanfic because it was really short and kind of straggly (you know, rough, unexplained...) So I really think I might take it down (if I haven't already.)

91 Name: Espanglish : 2009-11-17 18:19 ID:Lgo99V+J

Oh God, I think my first fanfic was a Chandler/Rachel fic for Friends. I wrote that a few years ago and got up to chapter 5 then stopped. I had quite a few reviews saying it was good but when I looked back on it, my writing was crap!

I've improved so much now and that was just by reading other (amazing) fanfics, picking up tips and just learning new things. I deleted my Friends story but I might do a one shot on one one day. Who knows xP

92 Name: The Shadow : 2009-11-18 00:40 ID:/vFCpKsK

Well, my first real fanfic is Pokemon: Rise of the Pokemorph. Of course, I've done a lot of writing before I wrote that one, but that is most definately my first fanfic.

93 Name: Abarai_Suzuka : 2009-11-18 06:26 ID:Ik/1lPzB

Aaaaaaaaaaah! I remember my first fic! It was a Renji/OC for Bleach and when I look back on it, I wanna scream lol. I haven't deleted it...though I want to :\ but I just can't be asked with my account anymore, cuz all my stories on there are. Just. So. Bad. screams
Haha, but it's a good way to look back and see how far you've come, right? ;)

94 Name: Hemiyami : 2009-11-20 03:58 ID:CEF4FBHS

oh my first fanfic, well I starting writing it when I was around 11/12 and it orginally was for my english homework at school. It was at first a character I had just created then I lost it [I was soo gutted and even got into trouble at school -sad face- ] about two years maybe three years ago i found it again, but i was totally stuck for ideas where to go with it but I really wanted to finish it. So now 19yrs old I'm still trying to finish my first ever fanfiction and I have others along side it. Cracked perfections it's called and I orginally posted it on a site called fanlib but that shut down [I almost cried lol]it's not on ff.net. it's got the Inuyasha characters in as it's my all time favourite anime and I still don't where exactly I'm going with it, I just have so many ideas, I hope my writings inproved. But some of my very early comments was I didn't use enough dialogue, since I don't recieve those comments any more I hope it means I've fixed that lol.

95 Name: LemoOoN : 2009-11-20 09:22 ID:6NVk/JQT

my first published fanfic was "The Choice", its a HaruxMori for Ouran High School Host Club
I've got an unpublished one that i wrote when i was younger that i'm still trying to work on!!

96 Name: Mangaluva : 2009-11-20 10:20 ID:qcjYP4ls

My first published fic went badly. I wanted to post regularly, but I hadn't properly planned out the storyline before I started writing and a number of subplotlines that were meant to be important dwindled into nothing, and by the end of it I just hated the whole thing and ended it rather abruptly. Still, the positive response that I did get for it was so encouraging that I kept writing, and my current fics are far, far better.

97 Name: Nyx : 2009-11-21 15:35 ID:jhKXnyPj

Oh boy...I remember it well.....

I was about 11 or 12 and happened to be obessed with Pokemon and Digimon at the time.

So when my English teacher asked us to write a story about "Lost and Found", I had to go and write one about rip off characters that somehow managed to get sucked into a conveniant wormhole and magically land in the Digi-world. Making friends with a digimon AKA "The result of when a Guinea Pig and a Giant Bat breed", they manage to safely return home on it's back.

When I handed it in to the teacher, her eye twitched and tried hide a grin or a scowl. I don't think I got a good mark for it as when I read it again a week later, I was horrified and rammed it at the back of my locker. (I imagine I was making a mental note to rip it up as soon as I could get away with it.)

It had unlovable Mary Sue characters, spelling mistakes galore and the bad puncuation was dancing hand in hand with no plot what so ever!

Thankfully, that devil's spawn never made it to the internet.

98 Name: efyraa : 2009-11-21 17:22 ID:pQOC4dJE

Lotus Lily, Emerald Orbs.
Than I realised the OC was heading down Mary Sue road, if it didn't already.
Still left it on as, afterall, it was my first fic.

99 Name: Azhaq : 2009-11-24 14:07 ID:PCwb39Qx

My first was a Halo fan fiction, in fact I am still doing it, I dont know if it will ever actually end ^^

100 Name: LASER : 2009-11-25 16:56 ID:lZ5VxSIf

My first was a South Park one-shot about Stan and Kyle being able to talk to each other without having sex (90% of South Park fics are just that) It wasn't very good but it wasn't intended to be good, just to make a point

101 Name: me : 2009-11-26 05:08 ID:Vq7AG3os

my first fanfiction was for bratz(never posted it never finished)until i went of it. I count my first as Their new adventure, a ASOUE fic :)

102 Name: Woody2792 : 2009-11-26 05:28 ID:0qeOBDnC

my first one was a Doctor Who one. When I look back at the quality of it all, it wasn't great, however I have improved, and I'm still happy with my attempt. =)

103 Name: Anonymous : 2009-11-28 15:09 ID:wA/7LKYu

My first was a Harry Potter one. It's gone now because I gave away my PC and deleted all the files. It was a very weird one about Harry and Severus... It turned into a slash somehow... I hate slash so that's just weird. :S

104 Name: Prokitty101 : 2009-11-28 16:04 ID:Bo5c4eEI

my first fanfic was a sonic one, but it ended up kinda like a script type of story since i didnt know how to do it right. i was like 11/12 i think...=///='

105 Name: Panda : 2009-11-28 16:48 ID:svEZ4PwF

My first Fanfic was a Gakuen Alice one on Natsume and Mikan.
I'm still currently writing it as i only started a few days go! (laughs)

I'm not a BAD writer, but i'm better at being a beta reader :P

I can't write, but i can help others improve. Sounds better when i say it like that! ;)

Panda ^^v

106 Name: Kiki Ling : 2009-11-29 04:11 ID:0iHkRmgq

My first fan fiction I will NEVER show the world it's that bad, lol! even with the grammar and spelling all corrected it was still bad! My second fanfic I put up on Fanfiction and I'm currently rewriting the whole thing which goes to show what I feel of my first fanfics, lol!
Kiki

107 Name: FlamingOrangeRose : 2009-11-29 17:33 ID:E3ZdhNQN

Mine was an OHSHC one-shot, which is still posted on ff.net. And it just so happens to be yaoi - slash for those who didn't know. I noticed some people are against that, but whatever you can't suit everyone's needs.

108 Name: Darksword512 : 2009-12-06 05:56 ID:JmAblPGG

My first fanfic was "Hidden Abilities". The main character is Tails from Sonic the Hedgehog and the plotline was quite twisting (perhaps too twisting because some hidden messages were TOO hidden ^_^'). But it did get a good reception and, although I didn't do too well on an emotion-filled chapter, I did pretty well for a first attempt.

I've improved quite considerably since it was made, I'm much better at battle and emotional scenes than I was and, even though I've only written two other stories (and I'm on two more at the moment), my storylines themselves have imrpoved too.

Good times, good times...

109 Name: Lorze the Brookes : 2009-12-06 07:29 ID:pEQLzo2R

My first fanfic? Lol, it was one called "Castle Wars" from when I was still a RuneScape geek :D I'm actually quite proud of it lol, but it's crammed full of text talk, which I now won't touch with a ten foot barge pole (except for in normal internet talk - definitely not in stories).

I've definitely become better at writing battle scenes and making them believable, as well as more in depth plot than "killed some people, won a game" :P But I still like the story for my first one ever :)

110 Name: xxLilMizCadyxx : 2009-12-06 12:38 ID:t/MkQn/w

My first was a Sly Cooper fanfiction, and looking back on it, I cringe every time I read it. No planning, no researching, NOTHING but any idea I thought of at the time.
I WAS like, tweleve at the time, so I didn't know what I was doing lol.
Now, my writing has improved SO much. Not even funny here, you guys!

111 Name: inulover90 : 2009-12-11 09:43 ID:sl8F7IQk

my first one is still being posted. i started a year ago and i just recently went back to read through and i can't believe what i wrote. i get better as i get to the newer chapters and i feel that i have gotten better but yeah..... lol
i have two other stories but i only have the one started on fanfiction.net. i think i have gotten a LOT better but well see what everyone says.

i have other stories i have written from when i was like ten and i'm afraid to go look at them! lol!

112 Name: Smile-J : 2009-12-11 12:08 ID:y7mwEPTv

My first is my only one so far. I had all my writing confidence knocked out of me at school and just thought I was an awful. All these years later and I'm attemting a part 2 of a twilight story.

113 Name: Eve : 2009-12-13 16:41 ID:3RCQ8Gr0

My first fanfic was "The Lovett of Her Life" a sweeney todd fanfic. It was really short so yeah I sort of have changed length wise. But in terms of my actual style, I haven't really changed much...

114 Name: whovianbard : 2009-12-16 06:02 ID:LF8UpiCU

My first fanfic was a Blake's 7 60,000 word novel I wrote as a bet for my best friends wedding over 15 years ago. I got it bound and gave it to her a wedding pressie. She liked it (which was fortunate). I'm just rejigging it to bring it up to spec before I post it on fanfiction.net. It's taken me until this year to write a second one, but I have the bug now....

115 Name: Slavka13748 : 2009-12-16 16:12 ID:KohTNCmA

My first fanfic, or at least the first that I was willing to let anyone see, was 'When The Fire Dies', a short 3-chapter FFXII Vossler/Ashe thing where the two of them both looked back over their time together. It's not terrible - the small number of people who reviewed seemed to like it, despite the slightly odd pairing - but it's not like I'd be showing it off to anyone anytime soon.

I'm still relatively new to the world of fan fiction, but I still think I've improved a fair bit since then. Or maybe not.

116 Name: WonderlandSyndrome : 2009-12-18 01:22 ID:CnItNlIx

It's not a proper fanfic, but my first fan-fiction work was a set of drabbles about Lexaeus/Zexion (from "Kingdom Hearts") called "What Happens in the Basement".

My first one-shot was "Pillow Talk", also a LexZex piece, which was also my first fan-fic hinting to sexual activity. My first real fan-fic is "Just One More Chance", again LexZex, with 25/44 of its chapters done. (Yes, I do write other pairings/characters. LexZex is just my OTP ^_^)

117 Name: Dave2380 : 2009-12-18 21:02 ID:RNmDGXN+

Mine was a wolverine captain america pairing called lowtown lovin . I wrote it about four or five months ago, im a bit of a noob at the moment.

118 Name: ... : 2009-12-19 06:34 ID:wIkwg5mQ

A horrendous cross between Furuba, FF7 and my highschool. It still makes me laugh for all the wrong reasons.

119 Name: XTimeGirlX : 2009-12-19 10:07 ID:sClfEaU5

My first fic was a very average and mediocre Doctor Who story, with no description and quite bad grammar. Since then, my writing has (I hope - remember this is in my opinion) improved greatly, I've gained more sophistication in my language while I'm writing prose, I now describe certain things in more detail than I used to and my grammar has improved my a long way.

120 Name: Sabulana : 2009-12-20 14:24 ID:AS8c8wxF

My first fanfiction was an incredibly short Sephiroth POV thing that was mostly based on my own headcanon for him anyway. >.> There were other things that came later, involving massive amounts of OCs that I guess were probably Mary-Sues but I never did write enough of the fanfics for it to become obvious. Those are gone now, taken down because I didn't think I'd ever bother with them again but the very first story is still up, mostly as a reminder for how far I've come since I began writing fanfiction.

121 Name: Unique Cullen : 2009-12-21 05:30 ID:YNkBlz9m

my first fanfiction was has been repetedly taken down and back up because of different flamers,

122 Name: Nyt Yanse : 2010-01-09 05:36 ID:ki9BPq5l

My first was a humourous romance one shot for Babylon 5- one of the canon characters gets caught in bed with an OC. I actually started a fanfic novel series out of it!

123 Name: Ellasphere : 2010-01-09 12:31 ID:R1MliqME

My first was a 50 word drabble for National Treasure which was pretty angsty.

124 Name: mentalguru : 2010-01-09 16:09 ID:FDxDyoRN

Ninja turtles short but multichaptered, with an OC female and an amnesic Raphael :P, the girl amazingly wasn't that much of a Sue for my first try- I openly had her call herself a reckless idiot (which she was)...

But I kept changing tenses and... man it was a BAD fic. I mean... amnesia?! Plus her male best friend was far too much of an anti-sue- too much of a bumbling self-centered idiot.

I still have the fic on my account, and I think I've (hopefully!) improved since then- still room for more though! A lot more!

125 Name: KakeruTamaki : 2010-01-09 17:19 ID:ZmGEEwjg

My first was called 'Mirror Image', a crossover with 'Ouran high school host club' and 'Beauty Pop' and I started writing it in August...It got pretty good feedback so i haven't changed my style mcuh :S I'm writing a sequal though, and hopefully my writing's a bit clearer and easier to understand...yeah. I'm a total newbie :D

126 Name: Kburn : 2010-01-09 17:20 ID:WLzGgu/n

I can't remember really. I think I started writing a fic over on AFF years ago about ff7 but deleted it because i realised it was extremely bad.

My first real fic was Girls and Guardians a W.I.T.C.H fic on FF.net, it was about the copies of the main charater, who in the original our said to be given new life but where or how was never explained.

127 Name: eeyop1428 : 2010-01-09 17:58 ID:6zn/TAYg

My first fanfic is called 'Truly Friends' for Transformers. It's still not completed :( Bad me. After practising my story writing in the months between chapters I see how bad my writing was before compared to now.

128 Name: figaro : 2010-01-10 09:17 ID:XD0kO9eH

My very first fanfic was a 200 word Bleach drabble, but I feel it hardly counts.

So, I'd say my first fanfic was a cracky Renji/Ichigo (Bleach) one-shot that turned into a 10 chapter story, and I sort of cringe and smile when I read it now because I can really see how my writing evolved from chapter to chapter. I've no idea of why it turned out so long and after finished it I swore I'd only write one-shots from there on. :D

129 Name: Tenshi-chan : 2010-01-10 11:37 ID:F8vp4L28

My first fanfic was horrific. It was about the anime Inuyasha, six chapters long and had a stupid plot, unsatisfying ending and as is said it was ONLY six chapters long meaning about eigh scenes happened per chapter.

I have a new account now which i created after several moths hiatus as a new start. I once glanced at old account and grimace whenever i re read them.

Surprisingly i never got a flame. It seems even they didn't wanna waste their time reviewing my story lol.

130 Name: sdde : 2010-01-10 15:41 ID:12fdOkSN

Already wrote this in the wrong thread, but;

My first fic, Control, is still ongoing. It's Teen Titans fic with BBRae pairing. It's written in 3rd person but from BB's oint of view, never referring to any of BB's names in the narrative, but instead using 'he' all the time. It's rather OOC for BB, namely being rather emo, but I didn't get any complaints on that. I personally think it's gotten weaker as it's gone on since my style has shifted away from lots n' lots of detail on feelings and thoughts, but that style suited the fic. Obviously, when I decided to continue it the problem of including any other male character made itself blatant. However, it was (not sure if it is anymore) popular and I've got a fic, Concern, further behind in the story written in the same manner from Raven's POV.

131 Name: Anastasia Demi : 2010-01-10 20:01 ID:zyePpXN3

My first fan fic was for FF7 all the way back in 1998. I still have it too (offline thankfully!) - in all its badly written glory.

132 Name: Madness : 2010-01-11 11:22 ID:szLNwaph

My first Fic wasn't that long ago but it was for twilight and now I hate just the thought of it being in my name. I don't nessecarily think its that bad my new stuff is one hell of a lot better tho. I've read worse thats all I'll say.

133 Name: djayman : 2010-01-13 16:04 ID:1RdFQwv8

i finished my first fic a few weeks ago. it was about bioshock, focused on the character tenenbaum and its about 10 chapters long. i had planned to do a sequel for it but exams got in the way :(

134 Name: NotQuiteHuman01 : 2010-01-28 14:54 ID:qxSJRo03

Pokemon: the shadow virus/prophecy

It started as shadow prophecy two years ago and the current version is pokemon the shadow virus, the first version was terrible but i've improved loads and discovered that based on the current size, it will be over 150,000 words when i've finished the next part in the saga Shadow virus: gathering of the gifted, and the final part of the trilogy "Unamed"

Its got killer pokemon and later on pokemorphs (some already some still to come) but i've been struggling recently because i've only got eighteen reviews for ten chapters and its a year old, i realy wish i could get some more reviews but i'll survive and reading the old version brings back soem good memories.

135 Name: NotQuiteHuman01 : 2010-01-28 14:55 ID:qxSJRo03

Pokemon: the shadow virus/prophecy

It started as shadow prophecy two years ago and the current version is pokemon the shadow virus, the first version was terrible but i've improved loads and discovered that based on the current size, it will be over 150,000 words when i've finished the next part in the saga Shadow virus: gathering of the gifted, and the final part of the trilogy "Unamed"

Its got killer pokemon and later on pokemorphs (some already some still to come) but i've been struggling recently because i've only got eighteen reviews for ten chapters and its a year old, i realy wish i could get some more reviews but i'll survive and reading the old version brings back soem good memories.

136 Name: NotQuiteHuman01 : 2010-01-28 14:55 ID:qxSJRo03

Pokemon: the shadow virus/prophecy

It started as shadow prophecy two years ago and the current version is pokemon the shadow virus, the first version was terrible but i've improved loads and discovered that based on the current size, it will be over 150,000 words when i've finished the next part in the saga Shadow virus: gathering of the gifted, and the final part of the trilogy "Unamed"

Its got killer pokemon and later on pokemorphs (some already some still to come) but i've been struggling recently because i've only got eighteen reviews for ten chapters and its a year old, i realy wish i could get some more reviews but i'll survive and reading the old version brings back soem good memories.

137 Name: NotQuiteHuman01 : 2010-01-28 14:55 ID:qxSJRo03

Pokemon: the shadow virus/prophecy

It started as shadow prophecy two years ago and the current version is pokemon the shadow virus, the first version was terrible but i've improved loads and discovered that based on the current size, it will be over 150,000 words when i've finished the next part in the saga Shadow virus: gathering of the gifted, and the final part of the trilogy "Unamed"

Its got killer pokemon and later on pokemorphs (some already some still to come) but i've been struggling recently because i've only got eighteen reviews for ten chapters and its a year old, i realy wish i could get some more reviews but i'll survive and reading the old version brings back soem good memories.

138 Name: Francys Pai : 2010-01-28 15:13 ID:k/INNGhD

My first proper fic since my PC died (My old ones have since disappeared) was called Mentally Unstable.
Was based around Street Fighter character Vega's background of him snapping due to witnessing his mothers murder at the hands of his father. His father's personality slowly starts taking control and Bison tries to help,though doesn't quite realise why until he starts feeling for him.

139 Name: moonphase9 : 2010-01-28 17:02 ID:wwZPK72Q

I'm still writting. I havn't done many, but my first was a death note fanfic. Its still too early to say if its much good, but there is a marked difference in the first few chapters, and my most recent ones.
My language has become more complicated, I'm better at proof reading and they are much longer and more intricate.
I would not say it was particularly good, but its definitly improving.

140 Name: moonphase9 : 2010-01-28 17:02 ID:wwZPK72Q

I'm still writing. I havn't done many, but my first was a death note fanfic. Its still too early to say if its much good, but there is a marked difference in the first few chapters, and my most recent ones.
My language has become more complicated, I'm better at proof reading and they are much longer and more intricate.
I would not say it was particularly good, but its definitly improving.

141 Name: Lupa Dracolis : 2010-01-29 00:49 ID:gjkxJ44n

I started my first fanfic in June last year, I think. Anyways, I took a break from it for a while, which turned into a few months...but this week I decided to start it up again. I re-read it, and was horrified about the Mary-Sue-ness of my OC, so I took it down and am currently re-writing it. My first full, decent fic is an X-men: Evolution one, but that one was Twilight.

142 Name: aoi-no-requiem : 2010-01-29 09:50 ID:yBTzinu9

My first one must have been when I was 15, so just over 2 years ago. It was an awful kingdom hearts one, the grammar and style are so different now. I think I've grown alot since then

143 Name: ichigo angel : 2010-01-29 11:50 ID:DwRTQw/J

my first fanfiction was a a Tokyo Mew Mew one which is slightly embarassing to think about it now. My friend was obsessed with it so I was looking up things to do with it for her, found a fanfiction site and I wrote my first story on it, a copy of something I started to write for the same friend. I definately wriet differently now though

144 Name: FlintDjinn : 2010-01-29 14:59 ID:pmmvTedK

My first fanfic was a rather long fic on the Golden Sun 'verse that was abrubt, poor characterization and the Plot needed some good filling out. I think I've aproved alot though

145 Name: Tristana : 2010-01-31 10:25 ID:XJtle4Ci

My first fanfic was so long... I never tried to count the pages though. It's been on hiatus for 2-3 years now because I just couldn't go on. I was rambling about HP with a friend and I totally cracked, saying that I would throw a demon in the mix, just to make them all go crazy. And I did - actually came up with my crackiest lines. It's still on FFN - and actually, people read that. But my chara was Mary-Sueish (well, she wasn't the kind who would mess with the actual story line... I just wanted her to find a way to save Dumby at some point and it involved a trampoline... I'm random). Afterward, I took on writing shorter, angstier pieces and I never touched the story again.
It was more like a crackfic, written for my friends. And even if I'm not happy with it as an author, I had fun writing it so... Guess it's okay.

146 Name: Splish : 2010-01-31 10:59 ID:xRVkujeE

My first fic was, Sugar and Spice and All Things Nice. It was a Robin Hood fic and actually I think it was alright, this is a big thing cos I HATE some of my fics. I havn't gone back to look at it in a while so I may remember it being ok but it could be god-aweful now.

147 Name: Andrew AKA dnny by : 2010-02-01 10:58 ID:yDQLJKOl

my first two fanfics were

Simpsouthturama guy: Yellow Submarine

same plot as yellow submarine with some added bits and bobs

and South park 30 years: episode 1, until i changed it into South park 30 years: Series 1:

doesw what the title says

P.S i deleted the first one because i red through it and though of it a plain, bona fied crap

148 Name: hpluva7812 : 2010-02-06 14:23 ID:nBg/HBvC

A Ron/Hermione songfic to Leona Lewis'/Kelly Clarksons' "A Moment Like This". I wrote it when I was 8, before Deathly Hallows came out, and its about their first kiss. it makes me cringe when I reread it, but i refuse to edit it, so it is saved in my documents as some kind of momentum :P.

how has my writing changed? I can write half-decent stories now :P

149 Name: Swiftswallow : 2010-02-15 07:55 ID:aMgACe/w

This is my first fanfic if anyone would like to read I think it's up there with my immortal lol
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5364892/1/I_know_what_you_are

150 Name: ... : 2010-02-15 08:25 ID:wIkwg5mQ

*nods*

151 Name: moonphase9 : 2010-02-15 11:18 ID:pXlo3Y91

@149,

If you are unable to handle constructive crit, don't read.

1) You need to work on sentence structure.

For example the first two sentences:
"Jumped out of the car and looked at the house."
Do you mean 'I jumped..." just putting jumped makes little sense. The readers are asking themselves 'what? who or what jumped??'

"It was just like the ones you saw in the movies with the white picket fence and everything the American dream." I think maybe a semi-colon is needed after 'everything.' Otherwise 'everything the American dream' runs is one breath and makes no sense.

2) Character description.
I've said this to someone else who posted their story. Why so much description onher looks? Is it important to the story? If not, then is there any need for the emphasis? Most novels go in to a lot of detail over the protagonists personality. Looks are important but tend to be secondary.
Also, this description makes no sense. Is she actually as pretty as you describe? You contradict yourself too much. If she is below average then why does she describe only what she imagines herself to look like on a 'good day?' Surely that is meaningless? Also if she is below average then she is basically lying over her good looks, because she is describing a wish. This makes her an unreliable narrator, which puts the whole narrative in an ambiguous light.

3) Double check your grammar.
'I forced a small smile Yes I answered.'
You miss out things such as speech marks and full stops, which makes it difficult for the reader to understand when someone is speaking, and when the protagonist is narrating.

Remember, everyone makes mistakes (I make plenty of spelling errors when I write.) But going over them and fixing them is a sign of respect for your reader. It shows that you care and you want them to read your story as easily as possible. Also, if people are too busy trying to work out what a sentence means, they'll either get frustated and give up (losing you readers and reviews) or they won't focus on the story as much as you would like them to.
For example, this sentence means nothing because its too garbled:
'Thanks to her I was an unwillingly a constant pain to my mum due to my pale skin apparently Bella had it as well. '
Thanks to who, and why would having pale skin be a source of such irritation? And why mention that Bella has it too within the same context?

152 Name: ... : 2010-02-15 11:26 ID:wIkwg5mQ

@Moonphase- I'm willing to bet that 149 is aware of plenty of this. They did say that the fic was 'up there with "My Immortal"'...

153 Name: moonphase9 : 2010-02-15 11:44 ID:pXlo3Y91

Hmmm, yeah, probably, considering the thread title...

154 Name: I/S : 2010-03-01 05:05 ID:q3HBv8Eo

Mine was so bad... It was a Twilight one that was completely unrealistic. It involved Bella going to join an evil group of vampires. It's so embarrassing to admit I wrote Twilight fan fiction as I am now a HUGE hater... -_0 Runs off blushing

155 Name: Theos the Hedgehog : 2010-03-07 18:29 ID:9YTWZfgg

My first fanfic was 'Shadow vs Shadow', a Sonic the Hedgehog story that took up several hours and over 11000 words in 10 chapters. I was really impressed with it to be honest. So much so that I'm currently working on the sequel!!

I'd like to think my writing has improved, but to be honest I've been so busy recently that I haven't posted anything for ages!! :-(

156 Name: mikirobbo : 2010-03-09 11:40 ID:+MN5pn8T

My first fic was a Twilight continuation. I have no writing experience at all but i really enjoyed writing it and recieved some great reviews so i am now currently writing a sequel.
I have kept my writing style the same but i believe my writing progressed throughout the story. What do you think?
http://fanfiction.net/s/5470129/1/

157 Name: alice:) : 2010-03-09 13:49 ID:t6xK1tmx

mine was a harry potter 210 page novel! :P no, i'm serious.

haha. looking back, the first chapters are awful!!! they're about this random's girl love for neville (i love neville.) and the writing was awful... almost every sentence started with i...

well, at least it got a little better towards the end. it did take two years...

158 Name: Nefieslab : 2010-03-10 01:05 ID:7vT97kDw

My first one was about Super Smash bros, it was alright but the Link/Samus pairing wasn't all that popular.

159 Name: DuxAtrum : 2010-03-11 08:54 ID:6rNw+qU2

My first fic was a frankly mediocre piece for the Devil May Cry fandom, complete with quasi-purple prose and a plot progression like all the characters had cast Hastega on themselves or something. (I mean really, looking back at it, it reads like it should have been the 'best of' moments of a better fic.)

Although, given the average quality of what's in the Pit, it could have been a lot worse. At least I had the sense to keep to canon characters, stay faaaaaaar away from Vergil (aka Estrogen Brigade Bait Central)... and I punctuated my dialog tags properly.

(Then a few stories later, I suddenly stopped. What was up with that.)

Since then, my skills have increased... pretty damn well exponentially. Punctuation and grammar are much better, at least—and now I know how to build up tension and let things take as long as they need to take rather than going NO NO QUICKLY MUST HAVE PLOT PROGRESSION RIGHT NOW

160 Name: shebaismydog : 2010-03-11 16:07 ID:uEmrz8V9

My first was a Halo one, it wasn't very good, but I wrote it all rather quickly whilst ill. Ah, those were the days. Now, I tend to plan more when writing something.

161 Name: xxxLoonyxxx : 2010-03-12 09:50 ID:2TP7o4/l

First one was a Dramione fanfic (yep, Harry Potter) and it the first chapters of it were terrible, which I realised, and later edited. I think I've written much better in the later chapters and the sequel to it... =D

162 Name: Trapped In Reality : 2010-03-12 15:34 ID:Dc0H+jzb

My first fanfiction was a Dragonball Z story, complete with a Mary Sue and many plot holes. I wrote it when I was 14, and there are many inconsistencies to it. Strangely, it is my second most popular story.

163 Name: ravengal : 2010-03-17 18:15 ID:RmBx6QN5

My first fanfic was a horribly mushy Fairly Odd Parents songfic. Seriously, it gives me diabetes just looking at it again. Simple solution, I don't look at it anymore. XD

There was a song in every chapter and, at times, I'm sure there was more song than fic. x_x Hate it, hate it, hate it, but it was my first milestone.

My writing has improved immensely since then. I learned a little thing called character depth XD as well as detailed explanations of things. Plus, I grew to hate mush. It makes me ill now.

164 Name: sharingansupergirl : 2010-03-18 13:17 ID:fOFHYSXJ

I'm still working on my first fanfic, plus two more fics, planning a fourth and experimenting with my own original idea.

My first though, was kind of like lots out there, and it was an OC story. Possibly a Mary-Sue, except I didn't want everyone to love her; they react negatively to her abusive moments, and she doesn't whoop any Canon's ass, but gets her own whooped. I didn't think it was that bad, but I'm going through the first few chapters to correct it anyway.

165 Name: In Need Of Slash Fix : 2010-03-19 11:13 ID:AIbzC63r

Mine- that I first started writing- was inspired by this Potterpuffs icon that had Harry surrounded by the ghost!parents and ghost!Remus and ghost!Sirius, and it says something along the lines of "I would have used this moment to grab Snape and say thanks". So I jotted down a load of ideas and started typing...I still haven't finished it loolz...

The first one I PUBLISHED onto ff.net is called Fear. It's kind of graphic..ally depressing. Sort of Drarry, but not really intended to be. Draco dies. Woop de doo...=[

166 Name: tilldeathdouspart789 : 2010-03-21 00:10 ID:tP+beVYJ

My first fanfic? I guess it's Night Horse. A Bleach fanfic. It's got about 20-or so chapters and I'm still not finished it. I've finished a short 10 chapter story called Without you and I'm currently doing Dream, but it's kinda going downhill...
I blame WRITER'S BLOCK. (Curse that damn thing...)

167 Name: MiissColly : 2010-03-21 07:52 ID:s4assfWu

Well my first fanfic was about twilight. im absolutly obsessed with that. I havn't written any other stories. But i am very proud of my first Fanfic. xxx

168 Name: YukonGhost : 2010-03-21 09:36 ID:Nf4lBejY

My first fan ficiton was a add on to the strawberry panic anime. The whole 'if Nagisa hadnt run off with Shizuma' thing. was terrible, but hey ;)

169 Name: YukonGhost : 2010-03-21 09:36 ID:Nf4lBejY

My first fan ficiton was a add on to the strawberry panic anime. The whole 'if Nagisa hadnt run off with Shizuma' thing. was terrible, but hey ;)

170 Name: Anon : 2010-03-21 11:13 ID:Cv4MxCr5

Mine was inspired by a Kink Meme. Actually, so far all of mine are inspired by Memes or songs. I don't have any original ideas of my own, I just take others' and expand them. It seems to work pretty well, ratings-wise.

171 Name: Anonymius : 2010-03-25 03:53 ID:FzroMRm4

My first fic was a Harry Potter styled sonfic of my heart will go on, entitled 'my Hate will go on', with altered lyrics sung by Snape expressing his sorrow that he'd never get the chance to torment Harry after half blood prince. It was the most successful of my early fics, with over 200 hits (it's increased since then), and largely positive reviews, although a major complaint was from those who felt Snape didn't hate Harry.

I've largely moved on from songfics since then, although I have others called 'I will survive' (Again sung by Snape) and 'filler', a take on 'thriller' describing the 'horrors' of filler.

172 Name: ASRAhsoka : 2010-03-27 12:55 ID:yXfciBCV

My first fic was/is a Star Wars:The Clone Wars fic that is currently 27,968 words and counting :D on FanFiction.net

173 Name: Refi : 2010-03-28 11:42 ID:A0HcbLwX

My first was a Final Fantasy VII romance fic about Vincent and Yuffie, and it positively sucked compared to the Yu-Gi-Oh, SoulCalibur and Death Note I've done now. Click my name to go to my ff.net profile and read if you want

174 Name: ani : 2010-04-01 22:51 ID:Njv6S/hf

i wish i still had mine, but i was about 12 years ago. it was a pokemon one-shot that only got posted at a fansite. not like pokemon's hard to write, but i've gotten better at getting the emotions across without stating them.

175 Name: Team Jazz : 2010-04-06 13:38 ID:d1PwA1qi

My first fic was a Doctor Who story with an OC. I didn't even know the meaning of Mary-Sue, but unfortunately, that was exactly what "Anya" was.
I posted it on fanfiction.net and got flamed badly and added to a category of doomed fics. It severely hurt my confidence so I didn't post for another few months.
I'm re-doing it now, with less mary-sue-ness and better writing techniques (hopefully xD)

176 Name: Willow : 2010-04-06 13:40 ID:1NenELrn

My first fanfic was a 20 chapter long Merlin fic. I don't think it was too bad, considering it was my first... although I've written a lot better since. It was my first and last chaptered fic, though. I simply don't have the patience to write anything with more than two or three parts to it anymore. XD

177 Name: Twilight-obsessed-Betty : 2010-04-06 18:51 ID:WGvtS5yk

My first fanfic was a Twilight one (what can I say, I'm an obsessed fan).
It's not very well written and they're things missing in the plot but I got good feedback nevertheless! Which made me extremely happy!

178 Name: Twilight-Rocks-4-Eva : 2010-04-07 09:33 ID:9k1+VpxV

My first fanfiction was originally a one-shot songfic, but I extended it. Then put it on Haitus, still havnt updated past 2 chapters...
@Twilight-obsessed-Betty
Hey, yeah I know what you mean, I have only written one non-Twilight fanfiction, which happened to be my first, seen as I went through an Anti-Twilight phase, I hated that phase :L

179 Name: MrDCWood : 2010-04-12 10:32 ID:gOkctrNT

My first fanfiction was on Kingdom Hearts. Before Chain of Memories and Kingdom Hearts II were announced, I wrote my story 2 years after the first game, presenting my vision of a possible secret. It took me two months to write and lasted 19 chapters.

the feedback on it was positive and I was so proud of it that I decided to take the original characters I'd created and put them in my own novel. Looking back at it now, I did stuff wrong and I was very much trying to find my footing, but I am still proud of it. I'm currently trying to wrap up my story of the Kingdom Hearts trilogy online with my Kingdom Hearts II story.

180 Name: Adair : 2010-04-20 00:00 ID:uOEqi7hy

My first fan made story was a screen-play type thing. All dialog with a bit of description, called Fall of the Flagship.
The first actual Fanfiction I wrote was for star trek, called Starship Devonport. It's going well I think, still ongoing.

181 Name: Rhapsdy : 2010-04-20 11:32 ID:vczAauFX

My first proper fan fiction was a FFVII Crisis Core fic based around Genesis' reasons for what he does. I still like writing those sorts of things, and should really upload some to FF.net some time.

182 Name: Rhapsdy : 2010-04-20 11:32 ID:vczAauFX

My first proper fan fiction was a FFVII Crisis Core fic based around Genesis' reasons for what he does. I still like writing those sorts of things, and should really upload some to FF.net some time.

183 Name: OuranFanGirl : 2010-04-26 14:52 ID:1zlM7OMH

all I remember about my first fic is it was short, rubbish, angsty and the main character died in around 800 words. Awful but funny when I look at it... a whole year ago cough it was Ouran and all I've written now is Ouran, I think I need to branch out more

184 Name: Niori : 2010-04-26 18:19 ID:HTffKQYy

God, I'm farily certain that my first Fanfic was one for Dragonball Z, back when I was all of 13. It wasn't the greatest thing I've ever written, and ended up being re-written, but it's not the worst thing I've ever written ever. I still liked the plot, but the writing itself could use some improvment.

185 Name: Dark Wolf : 2010-04-27 12:53 ID:xs6ik7a+

The first I wrote was an Inuyasha piece. I've looked over it on ff.net and think omg what the heck was i thinking? there's an awful plot, not enough structure and the base line sucks!

I think things have definately changed and im hoping for the better

186 Name: Joey : 2010-04-28 00:19 ID:QU9XtNsd

My first fanfic was for High School Musical, entitled Chancing Chanson, which is currently on hiatus. When I first started it, I hadn't actually even seen the film! :-P
Xx.

187 Name: Henna : 2010-05-22 10:11 ID:l9eiRthY

My first and last fanfic - HSM XD i was in love with it at the time, still find it cool, but not in the neeky way ;)
it's called the perfect love story, it's been on hiatus for hte last 2 years, I'm plaaaaanning on starting it up again =D so for the small number of tpls fans out there, you're in luck, you can read it heeeere - http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3956897/1/The_bPerfect_b_bLove_b_bStory_b

its actually funny =) btw, on fanfic I'm BellaEdwardZanessa.x it was Mrs Henna Edward Cullen, ages ago, but I recently changed it XD

ummm, i personallly think it's hilarious to see your own writing from years ago - cause it usually sucks =D

I can actually say that three years ago, I sucked haha

xx

188 Name: kagje94 : 2010-05-24 02:48 ID:FhwH1q3h

My first Fanfic was .. I think
I wrote two atthe same time the first one I started was a One Tree Hill FF that rewrote season 6 and the first one I finished was a completely diffent setting that he series (diffenent family members and stuff) gang moved to San fransisco I think both werent too good

189 Name: Prieel : 2010-06-01 09:30 ID:Cl8SREGI

Haha my first fanfic was a HP/DM one... The first chapter was five sentences long and incredibly angsty... Luckily I've improved somewhat already, but sometimes I still love to write crack and let my characters talk smack haha :D

190 Name: KatonRyu : 2010-06-14 14:14 ID:wDDmUQaR

I wrote my first fic when I was eight or so, before I even knew of the term fanfic. It was a Scooby-Doo fic. It was three pages long and the conclusion made zero sense, because I had them mention something that never even happened in the story. Since then my most notable difference would be switching to English, but I did improve a lot, and even from four years ago to now things have changed a lot.

I'm currently in the process of retrieving my writings from when I was a little kid, and I'll upload them on FF and FP in both English and the original Dutch, just for the hell of it.

191 Name: fan-to-fiction : 2010-06-16 06:35 ID:BZeZNIiF

My first fanfic was written during class at the age of twelve. I was already writing a lot but never in English before. Since then, English is the language I use most. And I write less poems now (only on fictionpress still).

For my writing style, grammar and spelling has improved (and is still improving). And I'm more in tune with the chrachters sine I know them longer now.

192 Name: slashfilled-mind : 2010-06-24 06:47 ID:I8YM4Xl6

First fic was a Naruto one, paired Naruto/Hinata. I''m not sure what it was about any more, just that it was sappy and REALLY badly written. I guess that was about 3 years ago... Since then I've moved on to slash, and never looked back. XD
Although, I was watching naruto Shippuuden today, and there was this adorable NaruHina moment, and I was all like ''I can't believe I used to ship this... Where are the Sasuke/Naruto moments!'' :3 If only i could go back to the times when I wasn't an insane yaoi fangirl... (some off) my friends would be off so much better... XD

193 Name: YolandaFriella : 2010-06-24 15:36 ID:0FI0Rtmm

Ouch. Haha my first fanfic was HORRIBLE!! I cannot believe I wrote like that back then XD

194 Name: MizukixTsukiyomi : 2010-06-24 17:42 ID:6y8DuQiv

My first fanfic was a success! At least I thought that ha-ha XD
For my first fanfic I wanted to make like a mix of action/adventure with romance in it. So I decided to mix up my favorite two characters from Bleach and Inuyasha and make them pair up.

ICHIGO AND KAGOME! Ha-ha! When I first wrote this, I was actually afraid of writing the action scenes. I thought they were horrible but I had tried my best. Though it was my first fanfic, it was a total of 22 chapters and a sequel to it because it was a hit in the BleachxInuyasha Crossover section.

When I first wrote it, these two people weren't such a big thing, but I was like I'll make one! Now I see many people making their own with this pairing and pairing Kagome with others in Bleach.

I still keep writing BleachxInuyasha crossovers since I am best at it!

195 Name: Kaimaler : 2010-07-03 08:05 ID:+TetquYA

Oh God.
My first story (that I can recall) was a Halo fanfiction. It was based around OC's, a female sangheilian and two marines. Isunusi, Kenny Jason, and Gwen Hiroson.

I've actually decided to rewrite it completely. Yay!

196 Name: Kaimaler : 2010-07-03 08:05 ID:+TetquYA

Oh God.
My first story (that I can recall) was a Halo fanfiction. It was based around OC's, a female sangheilian and two marines. Isunusi, Kenny Jason, and Gwen Hiroson.

I've actually decided to rewrite it completely. Yay!

197 Name: Kaimaler : 2010-07-03 08:06 ID:+TetquYA

Oh God.
My first story (that I can recall) was a Halo fanfiction. It was based around OC's, a female sangheilian and two marines. Isunusi, Kenny Jason, and Gwen Hiroson.

I've actually decided to rewrite it completely. Yay!

198 Name: LuvNaruto101◆xf4ZqoJ7xY : 2010-07-07 20:24 ID:MPiSW14r

My first story was a Sasunaru story. Bad grammar and structure '^-^. I wrote it on notecards.(I don't know why)
I really want some opinions.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4499333/1/True_tears
My writing has changed in my other stories and latest chapters of my first story.

199 Name: Ozuchi Kozuchi : 2010-07-11 17:31 ID:VJiS9+in

My first FanFic was a D.Gray-man one-shot based on my favorite pairing. I guess it went over well... No flamers and some reviews so I'm a happy little FF-writer. Then again, I'm new to this, so I'll probably look back in a few months and think "What is this crap?" ^^

200 Name: Crystal Volcheck : 2010-07-12 18:10 ID:tDy1Fm//

My first was actually a Twilight poem I wrote for school, then came the songfics. God, they were so awful, I just had to delete them.

My first two chapter stories (I'm rewriting one and deleted the other) were the worse than the songfics. They had OCs and Mary Sues. I'm just glad that my writing has improved ten-fold even if the embassasment is still there.

201 Name: castielannatogetherforever : 2010-07-16 14:07 ID:v7uwsf48

Short little Drabble about Cas and Gabriel having a talk after Dean and Sam leave at the end of Changing Channels. i deleted it a few months later after re-reading it and realizing how stupid it was

202 Name: SierraKathleen : 2010-07-19 17:42 ID:MMWO0w9E

My first fanfiction was Supernatural fic by the name of "A Struggle For Affection". Eighteen chapters and nearly 76,500 words later, I don't think it was too shabby.

Although, despite everyone's general liking to it, I will admit that I do believe there were some flaws to it. For example, I think I strayed from my main plot a little too much. But overall, I would say it was a bad fiction, by no means.

Since then, I think I've improved with overall style as well as keeping my stories basic. Also, I try not to include the names of minor extras that are included. I find that it makes them look like they have a bigger part to play than they really do.

203 Name: SpyralHax : 2010-07-19 18:29 ID:fTdD49Ag

My first fanfic was a One Piece smut fic with Luffy and Nami. Not sure how my writing has changed since then, but I have put more of an emphasis on changing up adjectives and keeping blocks of text smaller.

204 Name: Bella : 2010-07-19 23:33 ID:CjEPoDKI

Mine was a crossover fic with Will and Grace and Law and Order SVU, and it had about every bad fanfic mistake known to man in all it's 43 chapter glory.

205 Name: loloxoxo98 : 2010-07-23 06:36 ID:UWHc/EFc

Are we talking grammar wise cause if we are then my worst fanfic was my first one, called Love Lockdown. It's a Twilight ff of Embry and who he imprints on. Holy Moly it was horrible. Also some parts didn't make sense at all but the reviews it got were like WOAH I should not have gotten any reviews for this at all.

206 Name: Bitch Goddess : 2010-07-27 22:15 ID:wCrTZLnz

My first story was a Mummy story and it was horrible!!! I wrote in 1st person (something I haven't done since), I screwed with the wardrobe of the time so my girl was hella slutty, my character was the biggest Mary Sue, and the story made no sense.
That one isn't even saved on my hard drive. I should've printed it and then burned it.

207 Name: ZZKL : 2010-08-08 05:36 ID:OI0UFFi/

Oh, man. My first was a Digimon story back when I learned how to write using the Script-style. It was hideous, terribly spelled, and flat out appalling before I even introduced the OC Gary Stu.

All of it was started when I was 12 and most thankfully has long since purged and died. Just looking back at it really makes me cringe and wonder how I could have ever put that down in note pad and later uploaded it.

208 Name: HaniTwili : 2010-08-08 14:54 ID:k1Goj2K2

My first written fic was a crackish Harry Potter fic that I thought was hilarious... The spelling was terrible, the plot didn't exist, and for some reason Voldemort and Hermione ended up married... :T Well, I was in second grade, so that's to be expected!

My first non-Mary Sue fic would be the Hetalia fic Two Years to Remember: The IYSA. I think that Hetalia has really improved my writing...

209 Name: XxObsessivexX : 2010-08-08 19:07 ID:720NxqLG

mine was a SasuNaru fic, which i still havent gotten around to finishing yet... ehehe ^.^' i reread all the stories that i had so far and i was like, "wtf was i on?" it was slightly confusing me and i understood why some of the reviewers were asking questions. i try to make fics good and when i update them, they seem acceptable, but after i reread them, i am completely unsatisfied.
>>208
lol Hermione and Woldemort? Wow that must be a crack pairing XD i respect u dude

210 Name: XxObsessivexX : 2010-08-08 19:21 ID:720NxqLG

wait, the first fanfic i READ or written?

if it was one that i read, it would be this Daa! Daa! Daa! fic i randomly found on google. it was on an unfamiliar site and i didnt know what fanfiction was back then. I do recall the author adding this OC to be paired with Ryuu, which now sends unwanted shivers down my spine.

211 Name: PatchsFallenAngel : 2010-08-10 05:26 ID:WSc0bbpP

My first story was a one-shot. It was really bad so I deleted it, edited it and re-posted it a few months later.

212 Name: XxObsessivexX : 2010-08-10 21:48 ID:720NxqLG

>>211
was it under the consent of the original author? did you put in a disclaimer or something?

213 Name: Total Drama Addict : 2010-08-11 09:00 ID:veV2Cte0

my first story on ff was a CodyxBeth oneshot(TDI). at the time i thought it was good, but looking back on it... lets just say, my writing has improved a LOT.
but it's still a cute story. :)

okay, technically my first story EVER was a GwenxTrent one(also TDI), but i screwed it up so bad that i didn't even put it on the website. i sometimes consider editing it and making it better, but it's really long and i don't have the time or the attention span.

214 Name: EvilFuzzy9 : 2010-08-11 12:52 ID:pVXlaz+G

Well, I technically have two first fanfics: the first one I ever tried to write, and the first one I ever actually wrote.

The first one I ever tried to write was -- I think -- a crossover between Metroid and Teen Titans, but that was years ago, and I never even got past the first few lines, so I usually don't count that one. This was anywhere from one to two years before I joined ff dot net. So, yeah...

My first written and posted fanfic can be read right here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3008512/1/Parrotboy_the_tale_of_How_Sasuke_got_his_Hairstyl It's over four years old and less than three hundred words long. While the execution, compared to my more recent fics, is frankly abysmal and childish. The punctuation is not as good as I would like, it includes some of the gratuitous (and very poor Japanese that I would later work to largely phase out of my anime/manga fandom fics -- this, combined with a period of partial-script format that, in at least one fic, continued untl fairly recently in my fanfiction career, makes some of my older works rather difficult for to read without cringing in embarrassment.

The fic, 'Parrotboy (the tale of How Sasuke got his Hairstyle)' was about... well... how Sasuke got his hairstyle. The basic gist of the plot is that little Sasuke, tired of being ignored by his older brother, tried to think of a way to make Itachi pay attention to him. He notices a nature program on the television, and he hears the host talking about how male cockatiels[sic, because that effing word is too effing impossible to effing spell] use their distinctive crests to catch the attention of potential mates (and of course, li'l Sasuke doesn't know what 'potential mates' means). Hearing this, he decides to model his hair after the cockatiel[man I hate that animal, if only because I have no idea how to spell that word). Sasuke then redoubles his efforts to get Itachi's attention, which annoys Itachi to the point of killing their whole clan. Also, Sasuke's hairstyle does its natural purpose of attracting mates, resulting in his rabid horde of fan-girls.

Heh, upon writing this post, I just realized that it has been a while since I last wrote a simple humorous oneshot... I think, perhaps, I should remedy this.

215 Name: 1superkawaii : 2010-08-11 13:46 ID:yKyn6PoK

Well my first was a Bleach fanfic called Paradox. Byakuya/Rukia pairing. A time travel fic and on the logner side. I seemed posessed while writing and couldent stop for days. I had a bunch of errors and I should have used shorter paragraphs to make reading easier. With every story after I saw an improvement and I slowed down to review it better.

216 Name: Nan00k : 2010-08-11 20:26 ID:CTWxXRZL

Oh boy...my first fan fiction was a Harry Potter, monstrous, Mary-Sue-centered NIGHTMARE. Ugh. I dare not say more. I believe I wrote it in sixth grade, perhaps, so it was about eight years ago. Thank goodness I've grown considerably since that horrible attempt. Every writing skill I have has gotten better since then actually (at least, to me they have). I suppose I had to learn to fall down and slam my face into the pavement first before I could walk haha.

217 Name: Jaelyn : 2010-08-14 15:30 ID:bzVS5GTB

My first fanfic was a Harry Potter fic I started in the sixth grade. Its not too horrible, but I havent finished it yet or gotten far enough into it for it to be horrible. My writing style has changed so much that the original plot I planned for it has changed. My first (and only) completed fic was a comedic (and slightly crack-ish) Harry Potter fic, where Harry, Draco, Pansy, Hermione, Ron, and Blaise plan a Halloween party. Draco was OoC at a lot of times, but I actually had reasons why...plus it was sort of meant to be kind of a parody but still kind of serious. I'm planning the sequel now.

218 Name: Sakucherryblossoms : 2010-08-15 09:42 ID:+6CINEb8

The first fanfic I ever wrote was a horribly written; I am not proud of it at all. I am too sentimental to delete it however, maybe i'll just try to edit it.

219 Name: Nightlife666 : 2010-08-16 01:20 ID:K498VjOB

my first ever fan fic was a purejoy (CSI- Catherine and Grissom). It went to 29 chapters or something like that and it took me three years to finish. The funny thing about it is its the only none Femslash piece I wrote.

220 Name: DiGi Kurosaki : 2010-09-16 02:24 ID:pDpLzpyI

Oh dear...it was SO LONG ago...let's see. I'm pretty sure that it was a Fullmetal Alchemist story called... "The Ice Alchemist"? It was about Winry being an alchemist or something like that... Sadly, I lost all 13 typed chapters of it when we got rid of my first computer. I actually cried.

221 Name: Miss-Almond : 2010-09-26 16:27 ID:VRax5XUQ

My first fanfic. was a twilight one (I know)
And it was so freakin bad!!!
I've made a one shot out of it because I liked the first chap but I've improved so much since then (jeej for me :D)

222 Name: Calyn : 2010-10-21 16:30 ID:RRDKekUZ

The first fanfic I posted KNOWING there was such a thing as fanfiction was "Call Me Katie" in the Coraline fandom. I haven't updated it in about eight months because I haven't had time to write much, and my writing style has changed about 85% in those eight months, but I honestly do think it's fairly good and I have every intent of finishing it. And its AU version, and the four sequels to that. I've had them kicking around in my head for a year. Here's the first chapter, if anyone wants to read: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5581829/1/

The first thing I ever wrote which COULD be classified as a fanfic was "Child in the Midst," (Bible fandom) when I was going into 9th grade four-and-a-half years ago. I was very proud of it then, and I still am. It can be found here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5717473/1/Child_in_the_Midst

223 Name: Peter (Miz-KTakase) : 2010-10-23 20:46 ID:AA6XkidP

I never written Fan Fics, since I was drawing and writing.

My first fan fic was entitled "Mimi Tachikawa's Disappearance". It's an old work, but it's still under work, since my story needs more ideas.

Here's the link, if you'd like to read it: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5574657/1/Mimi_Tachikawas_Disappearance

224 Name: Luna : 2010-10-23 22:33 ID:c1gt1Xwl

Mine is still in progress but hope anyone who reads will enjoy it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

226 Name: MrsSong : 2010-10-26 13:24 ID:g2nv7jj6

Mine was a Doctor Who fic, which I'm pretty damn proud of if I'm completely honest. It's the only fic uploaded at http://fanfiction.net/~mrssong

227 Name: Anonymous : 2010-10-26 18:37 ID:s2issmcD

ここの舐め犬くん凄い良かったよO(≧▽≦)O
http://creampie2.net/kuni/w5qejaq
舌で中の方までちゃんと舐めてくれて、しゃぶりつくような吸い方が気持ちよくって。。。
我慢できなくなって、結局最後までシてもらった☆(*⌒∇⌒*)テヘ♪

228 Name: S3_Cubed : 2010-11-15 20:01 ID:rMmVkII0

MY first fanfiction was a Ranma 1/2 one...which is a fandom I've stuck with ever since, with a few forays into Kim Possible along the way. I'd say my writing has changed in the 10 odd years since I first started writing, though I am particularly disappointed that I have yet to finish any of the stories so far.

229 Name: romanticakh : 2010-11-16 17:45 ID:hF8yPNXm

my first fanfic was on shugo chara ^.^ if you go to the link, you can read it. It only have 20 "chapters" more like pages. There are soo many errors, I've been thinking about re-writing it. I was sooo happy when I first wrote it. (this summer!) but I've grown alot scence then

230 Name: Kimberley : 2010-11-18 07:14 ID:Xh+f85f2

My first fanfic was a dragonball z fanfic but it is so bad! Hihi... I wrote it when I was 12. The first fic I posted is a Yu-Gi-Oh fanfic called Seto's Girl. Back then I was really proud of that story, but now I feel kinda stupid because of my many spelling and grammar mistakes and the fact that my OC is really a Mary-Sue. The weirdest thing is that people are still adding this story to their favorites.

231 Name: Kimberley : 2010-11-18 07:14 ID:Xh+f85f2

My first fanfic was a dragonball z fanfic but it is so bad! Hihi... I wrote it when I was 12. The first fic I posted is a Yu-Gi-Oh fanfic called Seto's Girl. Back then I was really proud of that story, but now I feel kinda stupid because of my many spelling and grammar mistakes and the fact that my OC is really a Mary-Sue. The weirdest thing is that people are still adding this story to their favorites.

232 Name: Kimberley : 2010-11-18 07:16 ID:Xh+f85f2

Sorry about the double post! Something is wrong with this computer!

233 Name: Slainteru : 2010-11-18 09:00 ID:FQiutDhS

My first fic was a Dramione shipment, and I'm still rather proud, mostly because it's the one story I've completed, and not left as a one-shot. Wondrous. However, it was born of high school drama, so to normal humans it's really not that special xD

234 Name: o.o : 2010-11-18 17:39 ID:ccclyt4D

My first fanfict wasn't ever really typed up. It was a collab that started as a joke between friends in the form of notes being passed in classes. Somehow it obtained it's own life and what started as a few lines turned into whole paragraghs and then pages. It was Ruroni Kenshin and our two OCs kidnaping poor Kenshin and Sano against their will. XD Despite the less than serious plot, and some of the obvious crazyness, it turned out quite beautiful... if not a little crack filled.

235 Name: Haley : 2010-11-18 22:35 ID:5jxv3qXs

My first fanfic which I just started like two months ago I think is ok so far. Its not very original. I wanted to start slow considering I find my self to be a terrible writer most of the time and did a Harry Potter gets sent the 7th book and people read it thing. But then the other night I had the urge to write and ended up with a one-shot with a female Harry loving Fred and then ending it with Suicide. When I finished I couldn't figure out why I was writing something so depressing when I was the happiest I've been in years ohh well i guess

236 Name: Haley : 2010-11-18 22:35 ID:5jxv3qXs

My first fanfic which I just started like two months ago I think is ok so far. Its not very original. I wanted to start slow considering I find my self to be a terrible writer most of the time and did a Harry Potter gets sent the 7th book and people read it thing. But then the other night I had the urge to write and ended up with a one-shot with a female Harry loving Fred and then ending it with Suicide. When I finished I couldn't figure out why I was writing something so depressing when I was the happiest I've been in years ohh well i guess

237 Name: Haley : 2010-11-18 22:36 ID:5jxv3qXs

My first fanfic which I just started like two months ago I think is ok so far. Its not very original. I wanted to start slow considering I find my self to be a terrible writer most of the time and did a Harry Potter gets sent the 7th book and people read it thing. But then the other night I had the urge to write and ended up with a one-shot with a female Harry loving Fred and then ending it with Suicide. When I finished I couldn't figure out why I was writing something so depressing when I was the happiest I've been in years ohh well i guess

238 Name: Haley : 2010-11-18 22:36 ID:5jxv3qXs

My first fanfic which I just started like two months ago I think is ok so far. Its not very original. I wanted to start slow considering I find my self to be a terrible writer most of the time and did a Harry Potter gets sent the 7th book and people read it thing. But then the other night I had the urge to write and ended up with a one-shot with a female Harry loving Fred and then ending it with Suicide. When I finished I couldn't figure out why I was writing something so depressing when I was the happiest I've been in years ohh well i guess

239 Name: Haley : 2010-11-18 22:37 ID:5jxv3qXs

My first fanfic which I just started like two months ago I think is ok so far. Its not very original. I wanted to start slow considering I find my self to be a terrible writer most of the time and did a Harry Potter gets sent the 7th book and people read it thing. But then the other night I had the urge to write and ended up with a one-shot with a female Harry loving Fred and then ending it with Suicide. When I finished I couldn't figure out why I was writing something so depressing when I was the happiest I've been in years ohh well i guess

240 Name: Haley : 2010-11-18 22:38 ID:5jxv3qXs

Sorry for the mult. my comp is really weird

241 Name: Maya : 2010-11-25 22:26 ID:spTIVLvS

My first fanfiction was Fullmetal Alchemist, completely just a random whim I had once in the middle of the night, and very disjointed. It's a one-shot, but it really started me off on the track to where I am now. I re-read it the other day, though, and it's so different from my newer writing that I couldn't bear the thought of changing it. It's neat looking back!

242 Name: Kuro Tenshi : 2010-11-28 09:30 ID:SgPDr+P3

my first fanfic is still in progress and i am having difficulties making the chapters and it is not so bad. it is a Vampire Knight and Inuyasha crossover, Takumi and Kagome couple. it was one of the stories i wrote for months and still is writing.

243 Name: Mungetsu : 2010-11-28 15:18 ID:e6lEKeHM

My first fanfic isn't on fanfiction.net... It was a Mario fic, posted on lemmykoopa.com. My grammar was a little off, and the chapters were so short. Lacked description too. T_T I wish I had the time to revise it. It was suppposed to be at least eight chapters long, but I got off track and just stopped completely at chapter 3. Now my chapters are longer and my grammar's almost perfect. Still need to work on the description, though....

Uh... It was, "Paper Mario and the Princess of Light" by my lk username, "someone else". Haha. It was about... Mario and new friends collecting pieces of the light brooch to awaken the princess of light. I wonder if I've got any notes on it stored away...

244 Name: Bella Shai : 2010-11-29 15:21 ID:abbcw3km

Well my frist was a narto oc story. My character was in squad 7 and I was basically writing her, into their story. Now I have my very own ideas and there is alot more romance. And thanks to my fanfiction.net friend I have this awesome bullention board to come to. Thanks Yoshino in the Moonlight3. Also mind my spelling, there's a reason I write on nothing, but word all the time.

245 Name: Bella Shai : 2010-11-29 15:21 ID:abbcw3km

Well my frist was a narto oc story. My character was in squad 7 and I was basically writing her, into their story. Now I have my very own ideas and there is alot more romance. And thanks to my fanfiction.net friend I have this awesome bullention board to come to. Thanks Yoshino in the Moonlight3. Also mind my spelling, there's a reason I write on nothing, but word all the time.

246 Name: Bella Shai : 2010-11-29 15:22 ID:abbcw3km

Well my frist was a narto oc story. My character was in squad 7 and I was basically writing her, into their story. Now I have my very own ideas and there is alot more romance. And thanks to my fanfiction.net friend I have this awesome bullention board to come to. Thanks Yoshino in the Moonlight3. Also mind my spelling, there's a reason I write on nothing, but word all the time.

247 Name: Bella Shai : 2010-11-29 15:22 ID:abbcw3km

Well my frist was a narto oc story. My character was in squad 7 and I was basically writing her, into their story. Now I have my very own ideas and there is alot more romance. And thanks to my fanfiction.net friend I have this awesome bullention board to come to. Thanks Yoshino in the Moonlight3. Also mind my spelling, there's a reason I write on nothing, but word all the time.

248 Name: KazeYami : 2010-12-01 07:40 ID:VgAVuO8w

My first story was a really depressing and morally questionable. Not only was a Naruto 'fic (which i don't do anymore), it was a oneshot (which I was happy about), basically porn without plot (which I was pretty proud of), date rape (shame), and I've headily edited it every couple of years. But, for having written it when I was fourteen, I think it was pretty good and I still have it up on my FF account.

249 Name: BriiDream : 2010-12-10 12:51 ID:At+Tef82

My very first fanfic ever that was not posted online was an All Grown Up 'summarize all the events to avoid dialogue' thing. I never finished it. It focused heavily upon my OCs (a big subplot was the main OC's developing crush on his younger half-sister's older stepsister).

My first posted fanfic was just a poem. It didn't keep its original meaning since I took it out of a multichapter fanfic I had no plans of posting once I stripped another poem out for personal use (yes, I wrote a Naruto fanfic where many of the characters were poets).

250 Name: jyuuken114 : 2010-12-10 19:55 ID:IrnrFiY6

I am quite new in fanfiction (started reading fanfics from Feb this year) and have only written a single fic (posted it in august probably). After posting i re-read the oneshot for the umpteenth time and found it quite childish and stupid. The sentences didn't come out well enough and the whole storyline seemed rushed as if i wanted to finish it as quickly as possible.
This and the fact that my exams are approaching has forced me to stop any attempt to write more in the near future.
So, presently i am reading fics and am active on fanbbs.

251 Name: Moon Surfer : 2010-12-14 22:53 ID:UdwX+XoB

Ha wow that takes me back to about two years ago I was trying to look for Ulquihime doujinshi but found a fancfiction story about them. And so my addiction began!

252 Name: Kage666 : 2010-12-14 23:12 ID:YhCA1hu3

My first story was about Naruto getting raped by Harry Potter and then Orochimaru kills then for their angst. Truthfully, my writing was horrible, and so was my grammar; it was all over the place that I just had to erase the story due to its suck - ish. Other than that, I dont make stories as I used to. I had a few ideas as to what I want to happen but then as I grew; I lose inspiration to continue it cause I just don't want to.

P.s.- No, it, first story, was not a Yaoi.

253 Name: Bozphin : 2010-12-16 10:31 ID:LeDkre9M

My first story on Fanfiction.net was a Harry Potter Fanfic. It was actually not that bad except for my grammer and a few spelling errors. I admit as well that I did sort of make my OC sort of mary sueish. She is Harrys twin sister named Rose. I did get a lot of good reviews on it though, and actually ended up making a sequel.

I'd say I've learned to review my writing before posting. That was my big problem. And sometimes I try to go out of my comfort zone to make things more dramatic. I'm not much of a sexual writer, but I love the romance XD.

Funny thing is that I never used to like writing. Now I love it.

254 Name: Bozphin : 2010-12-16 10:32 ID:LeDkre9M

My first story on Fanfiction.net was a Harry Potter Fanfic. It was actually not that bad except for my grammer and a few spelling errors. I admit as well that I did sort of make my OC sort of mary sueish. She is Harrys twin sister named Rose. I did get a lot of good reviews on it though, and actually ended up making a sequel.

I'd say I've learned to review my writing before posting. That was my big problem. And sometimes I try to go out of my comfort zone to make things more dramatic. I'm not much of a sexual writer, but I love the romance XD.

Funny thing is that I never used to like writing. Now I love it.

255 Name: Bluebell789 : 2010-12-19 22:28 ID:wVcFKIAH

My first was a Shaman King fic. I'm not even done with it- I'm so lazy :P

It's a story of an OC... Sometimes it's hard to get people really interested in the character... Thankfully that Mary Sue Test said that she could or could not be a Mary Sue. It could go either way.
I just hope people dont think of her as a Mary Sue... She's much less of one than my other characters...

I think I've gooten a LOT better at writing... I look at my first chapter of my story sometimes and I see tons of things that need to be fixed/rewitten...

256 Name: C : 2010-12-20 11:45 ID:oTckCRq8

My first story was a series of Dragon Ball Z oneshots. They were extremely short stories ranging from 200 to 700 words and they're still pretty popular, which boggles my mind, because I think my writing has gotten a lot better since then, but then I go back and read them and I guess their childishness is just so much better compared to my more mature stuff.

I think my word choice and grammar has improved since then, but I guess it's still just a cute and childish sort of thing.

257 Name: Nerdgirl-hime : 2010-12-20 13:14 ID:xilTo4b1

Mine was some really long Bionicle fanfic which took up almost an entire notebook and I wrote it between 4th and 5th grade. It had zillions of plot holes, terrible OC's, the main character's sister was a Mary Sue, and the humor was mainly random slapstick.

Thankfully, I'm a lot better now. :D

258 Name: Tiffany Li : 2010-12-20 16:09 ID:K44ld6Lo

My first fanfic was a Maximum Ride story named Muted. It was finished a few months after it was started with a total of 64 chapters. There are a few holes and the grammar isn't the best, but I'm just glad that a) it was so popular and b) I finished such a big project.

259 Name: TomoNeko : 2010-12-20 16:55 ID:ciTikB94

My first fan-fiction that I remember was a take on why I thought Sasuke didn't like sweets, written back in '08. Just something cute and slightly Itasasu >3

I've gotten so much more descriptive then I was before. I used to just right what they were saying and that would be it. Not I actually give the characters more presence and emotions. And I also describe where they are now too~ ^^; (my grammer and spelling have probably improved too... :3)

260 Name: NamineInWonderland : 2010-12-21 12:51 ID:BD9prCft

Oh my. o.O My first fanfic: The Sasuke & Sakura Story. And it actually wasn't all that bad for a beginner. It has nine chapters and got like 26 reviews. Like I said, not all that bad for a beginner.

But now, I'm so much more descriptive, so much more creative. My imagination has grown to so much more than that first story. But still, I wouldn't change The Sasuke & Sakura Sotry even if you paid me a million bucks. :]

261 Name: Gio : 2010-12-21 17:03 ID:oPFIviVY

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6398656/1/The_Vongola_Ninjas

My first story is a Naruto fic with Katekyo Hitman Reborn stuff in it.

262 Name: Gabi1199 : 2010-12-21 19:51 ID:NB57amv9

ummm, mine was a rurouni kenshin. It was actually a really disturbing nightmare I had taking shape as a fanfic...yeah between the late night chocolate binges and a session of hating on Twilight I ended up with...well...something that dances the line between cliche angst and romance in which both characters would rather claw thier own eyes out than actually be involved...yup that about sums it up. To be kind it's too fast paced.

263 Name: hubbabubba.ouch : 2010-12-24 06:04 ID:sjv9+bDV

My first fanfic was a Sonny with a Chance fic. So Random! was celebrating a third season and Chad wanted to see what they actually did at parties. Baiscally, Chad saves Sonny's life and they kiss.
My writing has gotton longer, my spelling and grammer have inproved and my characters are getting more realistic and not random things popping in there heads.

264 Name: Vaneskera : 2010-12-25 21:44 ID:NmFAjy3u

My story was a Gregor the Overlander/Percy Jackson crossover. It is awful.

265 Name: Legendary Emerald : 2010-12-26 00:53 ID:rnBqCGDx

First time here on this site.

Lets see, the first fanfiction I ever wrote was a short story about Kirby that I wrote when I was ten years old. Some slop about an alien who could mimic other's appearances, and Kirby and Gooey (not a fancharacter surprisingly, instead a minor character from Kirby's Dreamland 3) had to travel across Dreamland to find him.

First fanfiction I ever put online at the fanfiction.net site was an absolutely horrible Sonic story that featured the worst Sonic fan characters ever. Thank god my old shit is no longer online. I've since replaced it with new, actually entertaining shit.

266 Name: Tea Egg : 2011-01-18 23:42 ID:UwYBWg64

Was a terrible, terrible .Hack story that revolved around a girl that had been trapped in The World following her defeat at the hands of an NPC. . . Or something. I wrote it when I was eleven on animespiral, and it had some potential, but was bad because 11-year old me wrote it. Surprisingly enough, she wasn't paired with any of the main characters. Ever. It also remained unfinished due to it becoming Old Shame.

267 Name: Lady1Venus : 2011-03-12 12:30 ID:JDJYW79m

My very first fanfic was with Sailor Moon. "Return of the Negaverse" I wrote the story on paper in 1997 - 1999 and then in 2001 I typed it up on the computer and have been writing ever since.

268 Name: DBI7853 : 2011-03-12 12:55 ID:/H3RA6Sv

My first Fanfic was The Sky Bearer, which got 23 reviews for twelve chapters. Although right now, I'm rewriting it because I put out a sequeal and it isn't going so smoothly like I want it.

269 Name: Piccylo : 2011-03-13 04:56 ID:tCWMchCV

My VERY first fanfic was a Power Rangers one back in the primary grades of elementary school. They fought a monster made of mirrors. There was some sort of snappy remark about 7-years-of-bad-luck in there. I wrote it on paper and some of my friends read it and they said it was good.

Ahhh, childhood.

270 Name: Tail Kinker◆G7bnjqxQ1g : 2011-03-13 18:16 ID:p8Mb4His

My first fanfic was Macross 1/2. Took me forever to complete it. It makes an interesting read, though, because it took me almost ten years, off and on, to complete it, and you can see my writing improving over time. :)

271 Name: AkitaFallow : 2011-03-13 20:08 ID:hSy13/WL

My first fanfic... Oh god. It was a Fullmetal Alchemist OC fic where a thief girl from London got thrown into the FMA world by a nefarious plot that had to do with her alter's death and said alter's father's ambitious (coughevilcough) goals.

It died after about seven chapters. There was no goal in sight, my OC was turning into a Mary Sue, and I had no explanation for the knowledge of alchemy/the Gate that the alter's father's alter had in London.

Yes, confusing. I thought so too. It is now discontinued, though I don't quite have the heart to take it down completely.

Thankfully, my recent exploits are much better, because I am no longer a 14-year-old fanfiction newbie. But even one of my fics that has been going on for a good four years now has changed in style. I notice that I have a much more literary and unique style now, rather than "This happened. Then this. This is what they thought." I like to drop hints and keep my readers guessing now. ;)

272 Name: J.E.McCormickGal : 2011-03-22 13:08 ID:OWZmPzl8

My first fic that I posted was a South Park oneshot which actually involved an OC (though I hoped that, without being given a name, she could possibly be a character if someone wished to see her that way).
When I read it back, I guess it's not so bad, but in the near-year since I wrote it I think my writing style has developed and improved. I still look back on some of my fics and cringe, but I must say I think most of mien are now by comparison, good.

273 Name: FluffyBunnies : 2011-03-22 13:22 ID:py7aqrhK

First....? I have NO idea....

Either my Gundam Seed Destiny or FFVII one...I forgot the dates when I started each. ;P

Well, when I look back, they both seem pretty bad when in comparasion to how I write now. I can't say I'm the worst writer, nor am I the best, but I have improved. Now, when I look back, there's so many....errors and grammar mistakes...typos and so forth. I'm too lazy to go back and fix them though. Oh well.

They were both about OC's, and I still write about OC's, just because I find listing off my own character a much better twist...plus, I can breathe a little life to my characters.

Fun.

274 Name: XiaoDui : 2011-03-23 09:25 ID:ISRqA+KE

My very, very, very first fanfic . . . I can't even remember. I know it was Danny Phantom related, but I can't remember what it was about.

The story I count as my first would have to be Day of Paranormal Silence, seeing as it's the first one I was brave enough to post. I was so proud of getting 18 reviews on that, despite the fact that I absolutely hate the way I wrote it. It was the Danny Phantom characters doing the Day of Silence, and it ended up being DannyDash.

Over time . . . I like to think I've gotten better. I went from third-person to first-person, and now I'm experimenting with a sort of detached centralized third-person. I like to think I've got the characters a little more like themselves than I used to, but not by much.

Yeah. Let's all just keep evolving, hmm?

275 Name: XiaoDui : 2011-03-23 09:27 ID:ISRqA+KE

My very, very, very first fanfic . . . I can't even remember. I know it was Danny Phantom related, but I can't remember what it was about.

The story I count as my first would have to be Day of Paranormal Silence, seeing as it's the first one I was brave enough to post. I was so proud of getting 18 reviews on that, despite the fact that I absolutely hate the way I wrote it. It was the Danny Phantom characters doing the Day of Silence, and it ended up being DannyDash.

Over time . . . I like to think I've gotten better. I went from third-person to first-person, and now I'm experimenting with a sort of detached centralized third-person. I like to think I've got the characters a little more like themselves than I used to, but not by much.

Yeah. Let's all just keep evolving, hmm?

276 Name: Muse-chan : 2011-03-24 13:27 ID:O1JxwKaz

My first fic was the first story I ever wrote (at the tender age of 7) so of course there was no commas, periods, quotation marks, comma splices, correct spelling... the list goes on, it was a truly devastating Dragonball Z fanfic that's plot consisted of my sisters and I fighting the the DBZ cast against a new evil(I believe I was going with demons).

...I'm fond of hoping that I have made significant progress since that time.

x3 I think I hurt my brain remembering that fic... it was so awful. I wish I still had the file ;.; feels nostalgic

277 Name: Uzuki : 2011-03-30 13:56 ID:gdjipO9Y

Well, my first fanfic that I ever published to FF.Net would have to be The Legend of Zelda: Time Gate, which I first published February 2nd, 2010, and finished October 16th, 2010. I'm now working on the second book, The Adult Chapters. Now, that's the first fanfiction that I published, but the first fanfiction that I ever came up with is The Legend of Zelda: Fall of the Fairies, a Zelda/Tales of Symphonia crossover. Then I created the second book, Chapter of the Aeons, which brought in Kingdom Hearts and Final Fantasy into the story, and then the third book, Rise of the Demons, finished the story. I eventually cancelled though for some reason that I don't really remember all that well X3 So I worked mainly on Time Gate, which was to be a pre-story to Fall of the Fairies, but ended up being the main story in the end.

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280 Name: enchantedsleeper : 2012-10-15 05:13 ID:NSLppmUc

I was writing fanfiction almost a decade before I knew that there was such a thing - my first fanfic ever was an Enid Blyton story called "Five Have a Very Merry Christmas". The plot: the Famous Five exchange greeting cards, have a snowball fight and fall down a chimney. xD I was very young, don't judge. In subsequent years I can also remember writing Pokémon fanfic and Harry Potter fanfic starring my own OC. I am so glad that I didn't know internet fanfiction was a thing until I was in my mid-teens. My first works on Fanfiction.net were Rurouni Kenshin one-shots, published in 2005. These days I don't really write for that fandom, although I really ought to go back and finish off some of my old works.

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