What about mushy endings? (24)

1 Name: firelilly : 2010-02-08 16:53 ID:2PkpwuzY

love or hate?
i guess it depends on how good the rest of the story is and which characters but its just a bit of a let down when the stories been do good and then the endings just a load of cheese.

2 Name: Francys Pai : 2010-02-08 17:11 ID:AOLLbPAl

I'm a sap for these kind of endings XD

3 Name: sugarpuff : 2010-02-08 21:33 ID:TsRpodzA

I prefer tragic endings myself - mushy endings kind of make me go 'eh', but tragic endings make me feel like I've been stabbed in the chest...which I like >_>;

Ending where 'they all lived happily ever after...' despite having gone through this, that, and the other thing annoy me greatly. Feels like a cop out.

4 Name: RayRay : 2010-02-08 22:23 ID:+KEIm5Ay

I think it depends, if it fits the tone of the story then its fair enough...

But I honestly can't see myself writing a happy ending to either of the two that I'm planning, one of them definately won't be, the other one...I don't know as of yet - we'll see how it pans out, haha.

5 Name: eeyop1428 : 2010-02-10 07:16 ID:/CbCBCmP

Mushy endings are better when they don't point out obvious emotions, like 'X felt despair but with a hint of happiness in the end'. Urgh, unnecessary and annoying to read. I sometimes can't help but write a slightly mushy ending but I try to leave out the mention of emotion and just describe actions to show it.
As the Robot Devil in Futurama said in one episode: "You can't have your characters say how they FEEL! That makes me feel angry!!" XD

6 Name: moonphase9 : 2010-02-10 08:40 ID:KVO25sQ2

As long as the ending makes sense, I'm usually pretty happy.

I prefer ones that have a glint of hope at the end (awww)

7 Name: Rivala : 2010-02-14 08:25 ID:qEkYWUPv

Isn't it weird how stories with a happy ending makes the story feel unfinished, yet a sad ending makes the story feel complete?

I like both, as long as the happiness in the ending isn't too annoying.

8 Name: ... : 2010-02-14 08:32 ID:LJilCoAo

Tragic endings, every time. They leave a deeper impression on me.

9 Name: Elkkun : 2010-02-16 06:13 ID:7K6geM/Y

>>5 I just had this random image of a story being all tragic then everyone dying.
"...and they lived happily ever after as ghosts in the lost realms.
The End."

-giggle-

10 Name: sharingansupergirl : 2010-02-16 07:36 ID:qkmUzFKe

It depends, for me, on how well the story is written. Really, I can't stand them: "and they all rode off into the sunset as if all their problems never happened" but if the story is amazing, I get all emotional no matter what ending.

@5 The robot devil quote made me laugh till my sides split. It made me feel amused. :D

11 Name: Ran Fan : 2010-02-16 10:10 ID:QK/dXMIX

It seems like most stories considered epic in some fashion are tragedies, like Romeo and Juliet, or Beowulf.

My personal opinion is that the tone of the story has a lot to do with how the ending will work, as if, say, Gladiator had a happy ending, it wouldn't have worked nearly so well.

By that same token, if Avatar had a sad ending it wouldn't have been nearly as satisfying. That being said, if someone decided to rewrite Twilight as a tragedy, I wouldn't object.

I think my favourite ending to a story ever would have to be The Green Mile, but I couldn't even begin catagorise that.

12 Name: Tristana : 2010-02-16 20:36 ID:bt1sRdDZ

I don't know... I kinda like mushy endings but I wouldn't write any. Except when it's like... crack. Or 'they went off and lived happily ever after - until the hot gardener came into the picture and divorce was invented'.

Ran Fan > When you said 'Twilight with a tragic ending' I felt like:
"So, we all have to die?"
"We're dead already!"
"That's totally beside the point. If the mighty author wants us to die, so we shall die"
exeunt - rumble and cries are heard backstage

Director: Where are [insert actors' names]???

Hum... that's just me.

13 Name: Ran Fan : 2010-02-17 02:35 ID:QK/dXMIX

Tristina> You're suprisingly close to what i was thinking, although I had something a little more like A Winter's Tale in my mind.

'Exit stage left, pursued by bear'

14 Name: Chris000 : 2010-02-17 06:14 ID:0Eh3AY8u

Guilty! at the end of my book, Warpath, my main character proposes to his girlfriend!

15 Name: ... : 2010-02-17 06:30 ID:LJilCoAo

I think the bigger crime is the name 'Warpath'.

16 Name: RayRay : 2010-02-17 12:13 ID:MFa10KXr

I have to concur...

17 Name: RayRay : 2010-02-17 12:13 ID:MFa10KXr

I am so convinced I just failed epically with the above.

Meh.

18 Name: Scarlet The Hedgehog 2009 : 2010-02-18 12:33 ID:lEMxbiYz

i love mushy endings, but i love sad endings better

19 Name: ... : 2010-02-18 14:26 ID:LJilCoAo

@Rayray- What were you trying to achieve?

20 Name: RayRay : 2010-02-18 14:48 ID:pO3rz0Rr

I was trying to agree.

21 Name: ... : 2010-02-18 14:58 ID:LJilCoAo

I did not realise that that was something one could pass or fail...

22 Name: RayRay : 2010-02-18 15:01 ID:pO3rz0Rr

I was more thinking of the word I used in relation to me agreeing - it didn't sound right, I was sleep deprived. I had a feeling I failed in my word choice.

23 Name: inulover90 : 2010-02-25 05:34 ID:Y+fwLba0

i am more prone to writing a happy and sometimes mushy ending, but there are stories out there that i love that end tragic. if it fits, go for it, but i don't think i'm personally capable of writing anything but happily ever after endings. guess i should give it a try one of these days though.

24 Name: Marth : 2010-03-05 22:19 ID:RmpK06D3

>>14 Is your character James Proudstar? No? Then namefail.

I used to be in the "tragic endings are always better" camp, but I recently... "grew out of it" sounds way too dismissive, and I don't mean it like that, but I can't think of a better phrase. Changed my taste? Anyhow, I think I just read too many really maudlin downer-ending fics, because since tragedy usually sounds deeper, it's also way easier to do lazily/suckily without the suckage being obvious on first glance. I went through and pruned my favorites a little while ago, and I had some appallingly bad tragic fic on there.

The problem with all this is that I started most of my current stories while I was on a tragedy kick, and now I think all their planned endings are ridiculous. XD
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