Same deal as it was the first time; what was your first fanfic about, and how has your writing changed since then?
Again, mine was an incredibly short, incredibly angsty, and incredibly mediore Halo fic about Linda. My writing has changed in that I don't like to write about angst anymore. :)
Mine was inspired by a Kink Meme. Actually, so far all of mine are inspired by Memes or songs. I don't have any original ideas of my own, I just take others' and expand them. It seems to work pretty well, ratings-wise.
My first fic was a Harry Potter styled sonfic of my heart will go on, entitled 'my Hate will go on', with altered lyrics sung by Snape expressing his sorrow that he'd never get the chance to torment Harry after half blood prince. It was the most successful of my early fics, with over 200 hits (it's increased since then), and largely positive reviews, although a major complaint was from those who felt Snape didn't hate Harry.
I've largely moved on from songfics since then, although I have others called 'I will survive' (Again sung by Snape) and 'filler', a take on 'thriller' describing the 'horrors' of filler.
My first fic was/is a Star Wars:The Clone Wars fic that is currently 27,968 words and counting :D on FanFiction.net
My first was a Final Fantasy VII romance fic about Vincent and Yuffie, and it positively sucked compared to the Yu-Gi-Oh, SoulCalibur and Death Note I've done now. Click my name to go to my ff.net profile and read if you want
i wish i still had mine, but i was about 12 years ago. it was a pokemon one-shot that only got posted at a fansite. not like pokemon's hard to write, but i've gotten better at getting the emotions across without stating them.
My first fic was a Doctor Who story with an OC. I didn't even know the meaning of Mary-Sue, but unfortunately, that was exactly what "Anya" was.
I posted it on fanfiction.net and got flamed badly and added to a category of doomed fics. It severely hurt my confidence so I didn't post for another few months.
I'm re-doing it now, with less mary-sue-ness and better writing techniques (hopefully xD)
My first fanfic was a 20 chapter long Merlin fic. I don't think it was too bad, considering it was my first... although I've written a lot better since. It was my first and last chaptered fic, though. I simply don't have the patience to write anything with more than two or three parts to it anymore. XD
My first fanfic was a Twilight one (what can I say, I'm an obsessed fan).
It's not very well written and they're things missing in the plot but I got good feedback nevertheless! Which made me extremely happy!
My first fanfiction was originally a one-shot songfic, but I extended it. Then put it on Haitus, still havnt updated past 2 chapters...
@Twilight-obsessed-Betty
Hey, yeah I know what you mean, I have only written one non-Twilight fanfiction, which happened to be my first, seen as I went through an Anti-Twilight phase, I hated that phase :L
My first fanfiction was on Kingdom Hearts. Before Chain of Memories and Kingdom Hearts II were announced, I wrote my story 2 years after the first game, presenting my vision of a possible secret. It took me two months to write and lasted 19 chapters.
the feedback on it was positive and I was so proud of it that I decided to take the original characters I'd created and put them in my own novel. Looking back at it now, I did stuff wrong and I was very much trying to find my footing, but I am still proud of it. I'm currently trying to wrap up my story of the Kingdom Hearts trilogy online with my Kingdom Hearts II story.
My first fan made story was a screen-play type thing. All dialog with a bit of description, called Fall of the Flagship.
The first actual Fanfiction I wrote was for star trek, called Starship Devonport. It's going well I think, still ongoing.
My first proper fan fiction was a FFVII Crisis Core fic based around Genesis' reasons for what he does. I still like writing those sorts of things, and should really upload some to FF.net some time.
My first proper fan fiction was a FFVII Crisis Core fic based around Genesis' reasons for what he does. I still like writing those sorts of things, and should really upload some to FF.net some time.
all I remember about my first fic is it was short, rubbish, angsty and the main character died in around 800 words. Awful but funny when I look at it... a whole year ago cough it was Ouran and all I've written now is Ouran, I think I need to branch out more
God, I'm farily certain that my first Fanfic was one for Dragonball Z, back when I was all of 13. It wasn't the greatest thing I've ever written, and ended up being re-written, but it's not the worst thing I've ever written ever. I still liked the plot, but the writing itself could use some improvment.
The first I wrote was an Inuyasha piece. I've looked over it on ff.net and think omg what the heck was i thinking? there's an awful plot, not enough structure and the base line sucks!
I think things have definately changed and im hoping for the better
My first fanfic was for High School Musical, entitled Chancing Chanson, which is currently on hiatus. When I first started it, I hadn't actually even seen the film! :-P
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My first and last fanfic - HSM XD i was in love with it at the time, still find it cool, but not in the neeky way ;)
it's called the perfect love story, it's been on hiatus for hte last 2 years, I'm plaaaaanning on starting it up again =D so for the small number of tpls fans out there, you're in luck, you can read it heeeere - http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3956897/1/The_bPerfect_b_bLove_b_bStory_b
its actually funny =) btw, on fanfic I'm BellaEdwardZanessa.x it was Mrs Henna Edward Cullen, ages ago, but I recently changed it XD
ummm, i personallly think it's hilarious to see your own writing from years ago - cause it usually sucks =D
I can actually say that three years ago, I sucked haha
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My first Fanfic was .. I think
I wrote two atthe same time the first one I started was a One Tree Hill FF that rewrote season 6 and the first one I finished was a completely diffent setting that he series (diffenent family members and stuff) gang moved to San fransisco I think both werent too good
Haha my first fanfic was a HP/DM one... The first chapter was five sentences long and incredibly angsty... Luckily I've improved somewhat already, but sometimes I still love to write crack and let my characters talk smack haha :D
I wrote my first fic when I was eight or so, before I even knew of the term fanfic. It was a Scooby-Doo fic. It was three pages long and the conclusion made zero sense, because I had them mention something that never even happened in the story. Since then my most notable difference would be switching to English, but I did improve a lot, and even from four years ago to now things have changed a lot.
I'm currently in the process of retrieving my writings from when I was a little kid, and I'll upload them on FF and FP in both English and the original Dutch, just for the hell of it.
My first fanfic was written during class at the age of twelve. I was already writing a lot but never in English before. Since then, English is the language I use most. And I write less poems now (only on fictionpress still).
For my writing style, grammar and spelling has improved (and is still improving). And I'm more in tune with the chrachters sine I know them longer now.
First fic was a Naruto one, paired Naruto/Hinata. I''m not sure what it was about any more, just that it was sappy and REALLY badly written. I guess that was about 3 years ago... Since then I've moved on to slash, and never looked back. XD
Although, I was watching naruto Shippuuden today, and there was this adorable NaruHina moment, and I was all like ''I can't believe I used to ship this... Where are the Sasuke/Naruto moments!'' :3 If only i could go back to the times when I wasn't an insane yaoi fangirl... (some off) my friends would be off so much better... XD
Ouch. Haha my first fanfic was HORRIBLE!! I cannot believe I wrote like that back then XD
My first fanfic was a success! At least I thought that ha-ha XD
For my first fanfic I wanted to make like a mix of action/adventure with romance in it. So I decided to mix up my favorite two characters from Bleach and Inuyasha and make them pair up.
ICHIGO AND KAGOME! Ha-ha! When I first wrote this, I was actually afraid of writing the action scenes. I thought they were horrible but I had tried my best. Though it was my first fanfic, it was a total of 22 chapters and a sequel to it because it was a hit in the BleachxInuyasha Crossover section.
When I first wrote it, these two people weren't such a big thing, but I was like I'll make one! Now I see many people making their own with this pairing and pairing Kagome with others in Bleach.
I still keep writing BleachxInuyasha crossovers since I am best at it!
Oh God.
My first story (that I can recall) was a Halo fanfiction. It was based around OC's, a female sangheilian and two marines. Isunusi, Kenny Jason, and Gwen Hiroson.
I've actually decided to rewrite it completely. Yay!
Oh God.
My first story (that I can recall) was a Halo fanfiction. It was based around OC's, a female sangheilian and two marines. Isunusi, Kenny Jason, and Gwen Hiroson.
I've actually decided to rewrite it completely. Yay!
Oh God.
My first story (that I can recall) was a Halo fanfiction. It was based around OC's, a female sangheilian and two marines. Isunusi, Kenny Jason, and Gwen Hiroson.
I've actually decided to rewrite it completely. Yay!
My first story was a Sasunaru story. Bad grammar and structure '^-^. I wrote it on notecards.(I don't know why)
I really want some opinions.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4499333/1/True_tears
My writing has changed in my other stories and latest chapters of my first story.
My first FanFic was a D.Gray-man one-shot based on my favorite pairing. I guess it went over well... No flamers and some reviews so I'm a happy little FF-writer. Then again, I'm new to this, so I'll probably look back in a few months and think "What is this crap?" ^^
My first was actually a Twilight poem I wrote for school, then came the songfics. God, they were so awful, I just had to delete them.
My first two chapter stories (I'm rewriting one and deleted the other) were the worse than the songfics. They had OCs and Mary Sues. I'm just glad that my writing has improved ten-fold even if the embassasment is still there.
Short little Drabble about Cas and Gabriel having a talk after Dean and Sam leave at the end of Changing Channels. i deleted it a few months later after re-reading it and realizing how stupid it was
My first fanfiction was Supernatural fic by the name of "A Struggle For Affection". Eighteen chapters and nearly 76,500 words later, I don't think it was too shabby.
Although, despite everyone's general liking to it, I will admit that I do believe there were some flaws to it. For example, I think I strayed from my main plot a little too much. But overall, I would say it was a bad fiction, by no means.
Since then, I think I've improved with overall style as well as keeping my stories basic. Also, I try not to include the names of minor extras that are included. I find that it makes them look like they have a bigger part to play than they really do.
My first fanfic was a One Piece smut fic with Luffy and Nami. Not sure how my writing has changed since then, but I have put more of an emphasis on changing up adjectives and keeping blocks of text smaller.
Mine was a crossover fic with Will and Grace and Law and Order SVU, and it had about every bad fanfic mistake known to man in all it's 43 chapter glory.
Are we talking grammar wise cause if we are then my worst fanfic was my first one, called Love Lockdown. It's a Twilight ff of Embry and who he imprints on. Holy Moly it was horrible. Also some parts didn't make sense at all but the reviews it got were like WOAH I should not have gotten any reviews for this at all.
My first story was a Mummy story and it was horrible!!! I wrote in 1st person (something I haven't done since), I screwed with the wardrobe of the time so my girl was hella slutty, my character was the biggest Mary Sue, and the story made no sense.
That one isn't even saved on my hard drive. I should've printed it and then burned it.
My first written fic was a crackish Harry Potter fic that I thought was hilarious... The spelling was terrible, the plot didn't exist, and for some reason Voldemort and Hermione ended up married... :T Well, I was in second grade, so that's to be expected!
My first non-Mary Sue fic would be the Hetalia fic Two Years to Remember: The IYSA. I think that Hetalia has really improved my writing...
mine was a SasuNaru fic, which i still havent gotten around to finishing yet... ehehe ^.^' i reread all the stories that i had so far and i was like, "wtf was i on?" it was slightly confusing me and i understood why some of the reviewers were asking questions. i try to make fics good and when i update them, they seem acceptable, but after i reread them, i am completely unsatisfied.
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lol Hermione and Woldemort? Wow that must be a crack pairing XD i respect u dude
wait, the first fanfic i READ or written?
if it was one that i read, it would be this Daa! Daa! Daa! fic i randomly found on google. it was on an unfamiliar site and i didnt know what fanfiction was back then. I do recall the author adding this OC to be paired with Ryuu, which now sends unwanted shivers down my spine.
My first story was a one-shot. It was really bad so I deleted it, edited it and re-posted it a few months later.
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was it under the consent of the original author? did you put in a disclaimer or something?
my first story on ff was a CodyxBeth oneshot(TDI). at the time i thought it was good, but looking back on it... lets just say, my writing has improved a LOT.
but it's still a cute story. :)
okay, technically my first story EVER was a GwenxTrent one(also TDI), but i screwed it up so bad that i didn't even put it on the website. i sometimes consider editing it and making it better, but it's really long and i don't have the time or the attention span.
Well, I technically have two first fanfics: the first one I ever tried to write, and the first one I ever actually wrote.
The first one I ever tried to write was -- I think -- a crossover between Metroid and Teen Titans, but that was years ago, and I never even got past the first few lines, so I usually don't count that one. This was anywhere from one to two years before I joined ff dot net. So, yeah...
My first written and posted fanfic can be read right here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3008512/1/Parrotboy_the_tale_of_How_Sasuke_got_his_Hairstyl It's over four years old and less than three hundred words long. While the execution, compared to my more recent fics, is frankly abysmal and childish. The punctuation is not as good as I would like, it includes some of the gratuitous (and very poor Japanese that I would later work to largely phase out of my anime/manga fandom fics -- this, combined with a period of partial-script format that, in at least one fic, continued untl fairly recently in my fanfiction career, makes some of my older works rather difficult for to read without cringing in embarrassment.
The fic, 'Parrotboy (the tale of How Sasuke got his Hairstyle)' was about... well... how Sasuke got his hairstyle. The basic gist of the plot is that little Sasuke, tired of being ignored by his older brother, tried to think of a way to make Itachi pay attention to him. He notices a nature program on the television, and he hears the host talking about how male cockatiels[sic, because that effing word is too effing impossible to effing spell] use their distinctive crests to catch the attention of potential mates (and of course, li'l Sasuke doesn't know what 'potential mates' means). Hearing this, he decides to model his hair after the cockatiel[man I hate that animal, if only because I have no idea how to spell that word). Sasuke then redoubles his efforts to get Itachi's attention, which annoys Itachi to the point of killing their whole clan. Also, Sasuke's hairstyle does its natural purpose of attracting mates, resulting in his rabid horde of fan-girls.
Heh, upon writing this post, I just realized that it has been a while since I last wrote a simple humorous oneshot... I think, perhaps, I should remedy this.
Well my first was a Bleach fanfic called Paradox. Byakuya/Rukia pairing. A time travel fic and on the logner side. I seemed posessed while writing and couldent stop for days. I had a bunch of errors and I should have used shorter paragraphs to make reading easier. With every story after I saw an improvement and I slowed down to review it better.
Oh boy...my first fan fiction was a Harry Potter, monstrous, Mary-Sue-centered NIGHTMARE. Ugh. I dare not say more. I believe I wrote it in sixth grade, perhaps, so it was about eight years ago. Thank goodness I've grown considerably since that horrible attempt. Every writing skill I have has gotten better since then actually (at least, to me they have). I suppose I had to learn to fall down and slam my face into the pavement first before I could walk haha.
My first fanfic was a Harry Potter fic I started in the sixth grade. Its not too horrible, but I havent finished it yet or gotten far enough into it for it to be horrible. My writing style has changed so much that the original plot I planned for it has changed. My first (and only) completed fic was a comedic (and slightly crack-ish) Harry Potter fic, where Harry, Draco, Pansy, Hermione, Ron, and Blaise plan a Halloween party. Draco was OoC at a lot of times, but I actually had reasons why...plus it was sort of meant to be kind of a parody but still kind of serious. I'm planning the sequel now.
The first fanfic I ever wrote was a horribly written; I am not proud of it at all. I am too sentimental to delete it however, maybe i'll just try to edit it.
my first ever fan fic was a purejoy (CSI- Catherine and Grissom). It went to 29 chapters or something like that and it took me three years to finish. The funny thing about it is its the only none Femslash piece I wrote.